That was some good poetry. It had all the qualities of a world class poem--nice rhythm, no difficult words, the capacity to drive people to thoughts. Though I don't believe I've yet reached to the level where I can advise other writers about how they should go with their work, I feel if you if you tried to rhyme random lines in the poem, it would be great. Some people forge random rhyming lines together and call it a poem--I'm one of them--but I have full faith in you, you give an impression of a great writer/poet.
Points: 120
Reviews: 3
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