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TrudiRose

TrudiRose

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: The Warning of the Sorting Hat

    It's nice to read a Harry Potter piece that stays true to the series. I find a lot of HP related literature to be too 'out there' in terms of ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: Homecoming

    Hey there, here to review your poem! Firstly I have to say I really enjoyed this poem. I liked the rhyming pattern - actually I liked the fact that you ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Is the English Language sexist? (Essay)

    Hey there - great article, as a language student at University I found it particularly interesting. I'm not going to debate the content of your article mainly because it is ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Review Re: Refutations to Arguments Trying to Prove God's Nonexistence

    Hi there, First up, I don't normally get involved in these kind of...let's call them debates? But it always bugs me how non-believers (who completely have every right not to ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: The Cap'n's Wife

    Hey there! Great poem, very original and clever. It's nice to read a poem like this on this site instead of the usual emo-esque drivel which everyone seems to adore ...

    May 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Only Good Things

    Hey there! First up I want to say how much I really enjoyed this poem. Poetry on this site the last few weeks has been, in my opinion, quite depressing ...

    Apr 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Four Little Kittens

    Hey there, nice poem it was really cute! I was instantly attracted to the title which unlike many other poems found on this site actually sounded like an enjoyable one ...

    Apr 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Another Haiku.

    Hey! Don't often see many Haiku's and in all honesty I'm not a big fan of them but I really loved this one. It has so much meaning in so ...

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Your Shadow

    Nice little poem which I really enjoyed. It seemed well thought out to me and a nice topic. The only issue I had with the poem was the use of ...

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: An Account of an Awkward Flower

    Hey! Great poem! I really enjoyed it and found it very comical in places. I particularly liked the lines: I try to get the food to my mouth, But half ...

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Film Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses

    Great piece! As a Disney fan it was enjoyable to read - unfortunately there are countless similar articles on the Internet so it wasn't anything 'new' as such, that does't ...

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Script » General, General Re: Road Trip

    Cool little piece - would make a great beginning to a very interesting story! I disagree with the comments below about full stops/periods - whilst I understand where the commenter ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Weeping Angels

    I'm not a huge Doctor Who fan but I remember watching the Weeping Angels episode and being terrified (I'm 20 by the way!) so when I saw this fanfic I ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Secrets in Seaport (EXCERPT)

    Lovely start - some nice descriptions especially at the start that painted a picture that (to me as a non American) really depicted the typical life of a family living ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: La Petit Mort

    Clever use of that French idiom at the end there - as a university student of French I have to admit I could imagine what sort of poem this would ...

    Mar 11, 2014


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