Hey there, here to review your poem!
Firstly I have to say I really enjoyed this poem. I liked the rhyming pattern - actually I liked the fact that you rhymed at all, not many poems seem to do that on this site - and you picked unusual words to make the rhymes work, like direction and retrospection and also roam and home which are almost like opposite words so that was cleverly done.
My only criticism is that maybe it could have been a little bit longer just so that the last line's 'finally' can be emphasised a little more but on the whole a good poem that was well put together and cleverly thought out.
Well done!
Points: 273
Reviews: 16
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