Toto25

You have it spot on. It's about the struggle with suicidal ideation, and not trusting your own mind in those moments.

I really appreciate your feedback. The last story is about a sexual assault I experienced in my freshmen year of college. I would have liked to convey the pain I ...

Beautiful! The format is simple yet elegant. I absolutely loved it. Continue writing please! :)

Hello Jared! Thank you for the review! I have done some revising. Would you mind taking a look? I really would appreciate some feedback. :)

Hello! Wonderfully delicate piece! I enjoyed how each phrase expanded the picture, it corresponded well with the theme of aging, or the sadness that comes with it. The only critique ...

Beautiful! Absolutely loved it! :)

Hi, thank you for the review it helped a whole lot! I have edited the story now would you mind reading it? This is a true story, I guess its ...

Hi! Thank you for the review, it helped when you(the reader) explained what you got from the poem. I have edited some parts to make them more understandable. Oh and ...

Fantastically dark and emotional! I loved it! Keep writing. -Tory

Thank you so much for such positive feedback! I have always been nervous about putting my more abstract pieces online, I have actually a whole stack of these type of ...

Thanks for the review! :) I will definitely try what you guys are suggesting.

Amazing. Writing about this subject is such a hard thing to do. But you faced it head on. You have courage and I admire that. This was very moving, keep ...

I love this poem! My name is Victoria by the way. I like how it flows while still using each letter of your name to begin each sentence. :)

The imagery of this poem was great! I loved the use of the ocean in this poem. :)