TonelessBard

Hey there! I'm here to review this poem because of the title \m/. Before I say anything about it, I have to thank you for returning my hope that someone ...

This is exactly how a person feels before a show. I'm just saying that because I know how it feels when you can barely catch a breath before it and ...

Hello there! First of all, I have to say that you've got talent, that's pretty obvious. I love the concept of your poem but there are few things that bother ...

Greetings! As I always say, lyrics are so damn hard to review because they lack one thing... and that's music. Lyrics without music are like a sandwich without bread, so ...

You what they say? "I don't know a key to success, but the key to failure is trying to please everyone." All I have to say is that you keep ...

Hey! I love this poem in so many ways you can't even imagine. This may sound SO wrong, but you sound like a female version of me. I agree with ...

Hey there! Nice rhyming! This poem could be even better if you manage to make it flow a bit rhythmic, but that's only my suggestion. Anyway, I love the heart/apart ...

I'll leave it a like because of the rude comment down there. People just write pointless reviews to get points, you gotta learn that right at the moment you post ...

That's exactly something I wanted to write few days ago. I mean, exact concept of your poem. That's why I like it. Anyway, I'd change only one line: "This disease ...

This poem has such a dark imagery... I like it. It's interesting and mysterious. "After funerals, people are found deep inside the cavities of ourselves and meaningless flesh belongs to ...

This sounds like a pop song if you ask me, but no offense. I like it. Especially the last stanza. The whole concept gave me chills, imagine what would it ...

This is very touching and inspiring song. Unlike anything I'll ever write in my future *feels sad*. I like the beggining: "Today I want to write a love song Unlike ...

Hey there! Your poem is simple but very beautiful. The imagery is great and the more simple it is, the more I like it. I have a question... Why isn't ...

Not bad. I like the chorus but those "rap" parts are kinda weird. This could be very catchy song in the future, but you gotta work on those "rap" parts. ...

Hey there! I know this is pretty obvious and strict poem. Sounds very aggressive, but It needs some more work. I'd like to see it with more metaphores and figures, ...