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Re: Shoveling Time
Hey Tiny here! I would lie to start by saying, this poem is very well written and used descriptive imagery. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece, I have a few ...
Sun Nov 08, 2015 1:43 pm -
Re: Obligation
Hey Tiny here! So first off, great job dude. I'm honestly stuck thinking about this beautiful piece. As a person who recently got out of a long term relationship, I ...
Tue Jan 27, 2015 3:23 pm -
Re: The First Rain
Hiii tiny here! Just adding to what my fellow YWSers have said. After the first, the next follow, The rain makes the clouds wallow, There was a bit of sorrow, ...
Sun Jan 25, 2015 4:25 pm -
Re: Do You Remember?
Hey Tiny here! I really like this! It's simple and to the point without being boring, and trust me, that's hard to do. This is super cute and reminded me ...
Sat Jan 10, 2015 4:08 am -
Re: What You Do Not See
Hey Tiny here! This is so cute and easy to relate to! Kinda reminds me of little kids on the playround messing around with each other for laughs. Overall very ...
Wed Jan 07, 2015 1:52 am -
Re: Summer Will Not Come Again
Hey Tiny here! This poem is so beautiful I can't even put into words how it built up inside me. From what I understood it seemed like two lovers desperately ...
Wed Jan 07, 2015 1:40 am -
Re: Just For A Second
Hey Tiny here! Suicide poems are my favorite poems. Sorry that's creepy, but dude you killed me with this one. It hit me so hard. Parents just want the best ...
Fri Dec 05, 2014 4:07 pm -
Re: Interlude
Hey Tiny here! Okay so this hit me man. Hit me right in the feels gut. As a depressed person I can kinda relate to the suicidal character. It truly ...
Fri Dec 05, 2014 3:57 pm -
Re: Empty
Hey Tiny here! I really know how you feel, if this is a personal poem. I recently have been through a breakup with my long time boyfriend and the emptiness ...
Fri Dec 05, 2014 3:50 pm -
Re: Serendipity
Hey Tiny here! (SB's don't get exited I'm not returning for good) I would just like to say that this poem is wonderful, gorgeous and strung with elaborate jealousy. It ...
Thu Oct 09, 2014 2:48 pm -
Re: Shakespearean Sonnet #4 (Recovery)
Hey Tiny Here! I really enjoy this uplifting poem even if it did have a depressing undertone. It was simple and to the point but I have a few suggestions, ...
Sat Aug 16, 2014 2:56 am -
Re: Panic
Hey Tiny here! Okay I have nothing to review here just a note. I personally get panic attacks when in large bodies of water, crowded pools, small areas, and crowded ...
Thu Mar 13, 2014 9:57 pm -
Re: How Jane died.
Hey Tiny here! I just have one thing to add to the concerns that Rhia has. my hands as white as snow. I hold my breathe, count to ten, I ...
Wed Mar 05, 2014 8:06 pm -
Re: Behind it all
Hey Tiny here! I only have one concern on this lovely poem for you. and what it will be like at home. her eyes flicker as she remembers, dim and ...
Mon Mar 03, 2014 9:23 pm -
Re: Cut your Cake
Hey Tiny here! I thought this was a sweet kind of silly look on cutting and it made me a bit happy. First time a person who read a poem ...
Tue Feb 25, 2014 10:01 pm
