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Re: Rosebud at Midnight
Timmyjake here to leave you a review! So this was beautiful. You have a lot of writing talent! I love how you describe the roses life and how it goes... ...
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter Two (Working title) Scrapped
Timmyjake here to leave you a review!! I shall review every piece you do of this story. :O Such dedication! :D Ok, onto your story. I liked this one even ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: Fantasticas: The Boy And His Staff
Timmyjake here to give you a review as promised! I'm sorry its a little late. I did say yesterday, but mothers and lack of internet kept me out all day. ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter One (Working title) Scrapped
Timmyjake here to leave you a review!! Usually I am busy doing my work as an agent keeping Mr. Anderson at bay, but today I took a break. Mr. Smith ...
Jan 13, 2014 -
Re: Just One, A True Friend
Timmyjake to give you a review!! So this was awesome. Very deep poem, full of beautiful rhyming and a flow, but also telling a great message. Sadly, there are only ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: The Tales of Ahberdahri
Timmyjake to leave a short review! So this was really good! The flow was so well and I loved the topic, although those names made no sense to me and ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: Glassy Entourage
The TJ here for a review!! Ok, so this piece was really cool. You always seem to have such colorful metaphors in your work, so as to entrance the reader! ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: Deadly Wish
Timmyjake to give you a review here!! This is a great short story, full of things that we teenagers go through daily , and some things that we never would ...
Jan 8, 2014 -
Re: Beginnings
Timmyjake here to give you a review! This was amazing! I loved how each rhymed, too! Very nice job on that... I see you are a new member as well, ...
Jan 8, 2014 -
Re: For worse or for better, we are better together
Timmyjake here to leave you a review! To be honest, I can find no fault in this. I saw this earlier, read it, and now I have returned to finish ...
Jan 8, 2014 -
Re: Father and son and father and son
Timmyjake to give you a review... This piece puzzled me... It seemed like a short story, telling about difficulties in a father and son's relationship, but it also seemed about ...
Jan 8, 2014 -
Re: Watercolour Winter.
Timmyjake to give you a review... Wow, this is so amazing. How you managed to make each line rhyme and then how you had that repitious line at the end... ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: Never Said
Timmyjake to give you a review! This is a great story, and I can feel what the character is going through, especially since I have gone through the same thing. ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: And then she flew
Timmyjake here to leave you a review! This was beautiful, honestly. I have no idea how you people do it. I am the worst at poetry. Your poem is so ...
Jan 6, 2014 -
Re: Maria
Timmyjake to give you a review!! This was really awesome... I wasn't expecting the ending, though. I was reading it, and then I saw the end... Whoa. I will hit ...
Jan 6, 2014
