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TimmyJake

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  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: Rosebud at Midnight

    Timmyjake here to leave you a review! So this was beautiful. You have a lot of writing talent! I love how you describe the roses life and how it goes... ...

    Jan 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter Two (Working title) Scrapped

    Timmyjake here to leave you a review!! I shall review every piece you do of this story. :O Such dedication! :D Ok, onto your story. I liked this one even ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Fantasticas: The Boy And His Staff

    Timmyjake here to give you a review as promised! I'm sorry its a little late. I did say yesterday, but mothers and lack of internet kept me out all day. ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Hawk's eye - Chapter One (Working title) Scrapped

    Timmyjake here to leave you a review!! Usually I am busy doing my work as an agent keeping Mr. Anderson at bay, but today I took a break. Mr. Smith ...

    Jan 13, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Just One, A True Friend

    Timmyjake to give you a review!! So this was awesome. Very deep poem, full of beautiful rhyming and a flow, but also telling a great message. Sadly, there are only ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Tales of Ahberdahri

    Timmyjake to leave a short review! So this was really good! The flow was so well and I loved the topic, although those names made no sense to me and ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Glassy Entourage

    The TJ here for a review!! Ok, so this piece was really cool. You always seem to have such colorful metaphors in your work, so as to entrance the reader! ...

    Jan 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Deadly Wish

    Timmyjake to give you a review here!! This is a great short story, full of things that we teenagers go through daily , and some things that we never would ...

    Jan 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Beginnings

    Timmyjake here to give you a review! This was amazing! I loved how each rhymed, too! Very nice job on that... I see you are a new member as well, ...

    Jan 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: For worse or for better, we are better together

    Timmyjake here to leave you a review! To be honest, I can find no fault in this. I saw this earlier, read it, and now I have returned to finish ...

    Jan 8, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Father and son and father and son

    Timmyjake to give you a review... This piece puzzled me... It seemed like a short story, telling about difficulties in a father and son's relationship, but it also seemed about ...

    Jan 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: Watercolour Winter.

    Timmyjake to give you a review... Wow, this is so amazing. How you managed to make each line rhyme and then how you had that repitious line at the end... ...

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Never Said

    Timmyjake to give you a review! This is a great story, and I can feel what the character is going through, especially since I have gone through the same thing. ...

    Jan 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: And then she flew

    Timmyjake here to leave you a review! This was beautiful, honestly. I have no idea how you people do it. I am the worst at poetry. Your poem is so ...

    Jan 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Maria

    Timmyjake to give you a review!! This was really awesome... I wasn't expecting the ending, though. I was reading it, and then I saw the end... Whoa. I will hit ...

    Jan 6, 2014


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