TimmyJake

Timmy here! I thought I would get to your piece before anyone else does *looks around for Livvy everywhere*. It's usually a contest to see who gets to the pieces ...

Timmy here! So I am just going to go through and give you the best review I can in the next upcoming moments, so I will probably be skipping over ...

Timmy here So I thought I would pop by and give you a review on this piece... but since I haven't read the other chapters and such, you will have ...

Timmy here! So this will be a short review because the piece is short... but I still want to leave you with something possibly helpful. I've been trying to review ...

Timmy here! So this will be a short review for this poem, mainly just because I can't find anything to nitpick. This piece was done very well, and I think ...

Timmy here! Nothing like actually getting to one of your pieces on time, right? This is definitely a first, and I am going to try and keep it this way. ...

Timmy here The first thing I thought when clicking on this link: Woah! That picture could really go, I think. The point in writing is to create the image with ...

Timmy here Huh, I never noticed that you had posted this work... and it was in spotlight and everything. You can always trust that I will completely miss over stuff, ...

Timmy here! Talk about turning the tables! I realized in this chapter how easy of a time they had been having of late, and how it all came down to ...

Timmy here You know what? I am not liking the language as much as I was in the other chapters. In the others, it seemed to stick to the dialogue ...

Timmy here I cannot believe that I am the first reviewer for this piece. Wow. Reading through this, I don't understand why it hasn't been picked up by multiple reviewers. ...

Timmy here! So this chapter just seems to be more interaction between characters, including more talking between Rease and her subconscious, Katrina. That talk they do doesn't really solidify anything

Timmy here for a quick review I am sorry that I have not gone and read the rest of your pieces, or even gone and seen your story before - ...

Timmy here! Rease sat at the table listening to the conversation that was going on around her technical: comma after table Oops, did I just get a bit ahead of ...

Timmy here! Talk about paranoid! Rease is over there just freaking out about being late for school, when I would be "Yesssss. One less hour." Of course, this is her ...