Tikaya

But more importantly: will it include dialogue that's formatted correctly? =D [But srly, I would be interested in reading that!]

Gotcha, then let's call her one of my favs of those you write about? :)

I'm rly invested in that plotline. I think Sally is also one of my favs of your characters :)

I think it does =D

I can but I only read Green Room stuff as of now. Maybe I will read the rest when the Green Room is empty.

Any time! If you have more questions, you can always PM me ^^

Ohh Tempest got captured first. I'm starting to see how this will play out. Still, poor Shadow. Nothing can change my opinion on him. He tried. And now he's cured ...

alright looking forward to that then. But not sure if Anna can even find her friends again, considering she just stepped through a random portal!!

Hm so the scene currently has a very overloaded paragraph that skips from the end of the chess match over the characters having a meal and a strategy session straight ...

Ah well too short. But no matter :) Have the comment anyway and maybe someone else takes the story out of the Green Room

Hmm I wonder when Nicole had the time to do her studying. I got the impression that they’ve been really busy recently! Hmmmmmmm the article is kinda mysterious but I’m ...

Why I was less critical here? Dominic had no reason to care about Shadow so the narrative wasn't weighed down by his absence =D Thanks for the replies, they make ...

Ah no don't make this about me not knowing the characters :) I meant it more like the scene was confusingly established and that Dominic, to me, literally came out ...

Oh that is a twist I did not expect. Ah well, random round redemption it is. (I skimmed this chapter, sorry) And hey, if he doesn't make it in the ...

Ah got it. Maybe there's a way to make the three choices Smolder can make even more clear? :)