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Re: Conceptualized
Good morning! Oh I like the concept! I really like the idea of this entity suddenly being born as a normal human, without knowing what to do with all these ...
Jun 8 -
Re: When the Fourth Toll Sounds
Good morning and welcome! This story feels like it has a lot of layers, like a poem. I like the imagery of the bell! That said, I feel like, especially ...
Jun 8 -
Re: freezing point - prologue
Hia! I wanted to wait and see if anyone else picks this up before you get the second Green Room review but who else to get my first review as ...
Jun 7 -
Re: Scarlett and Kenneth’s origin: Souls and Roses ⭐️🌿
Heyo~ Hmmm I think the scene itself is really good! I like the focus on the parents and how they managed to get their child out. I think part of ...
Jun 6 -
Re: Stained Rose: Chapter 1 - Part 1
Powerful starting paragraph! Oh I wonder if Marie was buried in the very same cemetery that Rose drew her on the altar in! The symbolism! Also another neat paragraph, that ...
Jun 5 -
Re: Alice-Alice and the aliens
Morning~ A quick review for a short little snippet ^^ Hmm it doesn’t really feel like this is a complete piece. It’s very short and doesn’t really give any additional ...
Jun 5 -
Re: Stained Rose - Prologue
Heya 😊 Saw your newest chapter in the Green Room but figured that I should give the earlier chapters a try first :3 I can’t help but get stuck on ...
Jun 5 -
Re: Nina’s origin
Morning~ I was thinking about what to read today and this story fit in perfectly~ I also appreciate the clearcut introduction that doesn’t mince words XD Curious to see how ...
Jun 4 -
Re: Henry's story-The adventures of Poppy McLain
Good morning~ Figured I read a bit of Poppy today! Love the design of Van btw (checked the forum link~) I feel like your first sentence lacks specificity. It’s good ...
Jun 3 -
Re: The Addicted Roundup Chap.4
*reads summary* *screams* Ahhh it’s happening, let’s gooo!! Hmmm but I am immediately lost on where exactly we are atm? A little time has passed since last we saw Alaric, ...
Jun 2 -
Re: The many winding paths of Grasscove, USA: Part Five
Good morning! I like how the narration immediately says “yeah there was no supernatural stuff, except for, you known, the usual” XD Okay, the reasons for splitting up, and especially ...
Jun 1 -
Re: Aeliana’s dreams
Ok ok I am writing review answers but I remembered Aeliana from Raisa’s diary and figured I would check out what here deal is, real quick! I like the italics ...
May 31 -
Re: The Addicted Roundup Chap.3
Hmmm no resolution on what’s happening with the other two. But then again, this story’s title promises a “roundup” of addicted so maybe we need some more characters to introduce ...
May 31 -
Re: The Addicted Roundup Chap.2
Okay I might have told alex that I wanted to go to sleep but then I remembered that this is also still in the GR. So I guess this means ...
May 30 -
Re: Heaven and Hell is pretty cringe, actually: Part Seven
And final part (so far!) Hui, I guess this one of your stories I have read straight from the beginning. I found the last two chapters a lot more enjoyable ...
May 30
