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Re: Five gloomy Richardson stories
Annnnd back at it again~ Hia once more! AH okay, we are back with Gabriel ☹ Poor baby. Hmmm I feel like ch1 is v repetitive because you mention so ...
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Re: Syboleth ch. 27: It
Heya Witch Aet! I just realized that there’s this Syboleth chapter that I have somehow overlooked. Blasphemy! I have come for it now :3 Hitting us with the spoiler warning, ...
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Re: the cross on the cliff side in the rain
Hia! I hope you are having a great day 😊 The summary is already very intriguing! Let’s head straight into your poem! I already love the personification in the first ...
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Re: Recipe for Self-Love
Good morning 😊 This has been in the Green Room for a while so even I, a non-poet, will now try my hand at looking at it ^^ I love ...
Jul 6 -
Re: Amias’ first friend
And we are continuing with this story~ You know there is something very special in having wrong dialogue formatting right in the first sentence :/ I feel like here your ...
Jul 6 -
Re: He’s back?!
That is a strong opening paragraph! I think the following paragraphs are also pretty good but then comes this: But then, if Jay were a hallucination, then wouldn’t Tim feel ...
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Re: Itinere [On The Way]
Sorry rebel, I took French instead of Latin, so I’ll be doing the English one only XD Ohh I find the line abt treason super intriguing, especially in combination with ...
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Re: You should come on over, it’s fun! [Ben’s POV]
And the next one on the list~ Oh I know which flyer they are talking about! Still it feels like you could add a reminder abt what this means for ...
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Re: The walk back home
Good morning creeper 😊 You continue to have the most stories in the Green Room which is why I am here today 😊 Ah I remember this universe; I did ...
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Re: Sam is nearly dragged into the abyss
Ok idk why but this appears to be the next story in that folder even if it doesn’t have anything to do with Alyssa so…let’s read this next? I feel ...
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Re: Give your heart out
Good morning creeper! Your story is next in my grand exploration of the Green Room so hello! Hmmm you have a repetition of “high” in the first and second paragraph ...
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Re: I Awake in Slumberland
Hello and good day to you~ I am not a poet but I do read what has been in the Green Room for a very long time 😊 I think ...
Jul 5 -
Re: Icarus and Sisyphus Guide Me Home.
Hia canopy, I realise there’s been a few works abt Greek Mythology posted in a short time frame. Must have been really popular in April for some reason—and I love ...
Jul 5 -
Re: O retorno de Ulisses
Hi Larejo! Have you considered maybe translating your poems into English? This might reach a larger audience, and there are a lot of poets here who I bet would love ...
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Re: MOTP: May 14
Alrighty, I asked the dice and they landed on your story for the final review of the day. And woah, just reading the A/N tells me this is gonna be ...
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