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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 7

    I like the idea of using different languages like a secret code. I’m still trying to figure out what it means to be a Dragonthro since humans and dragons alike ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Preparation Day

    Interesting that like all versions of Christianity, they make such a huge difference between men and women. Men get to be elders while women can only be sisters. I really ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Anita and Jennifer make a run for it

    Another movie I wish I'd have watched. Here goes! I really like the beginning and how Anita clings to her friend. Like the description! I'm a bit confused... Is Jennifer ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Carrie’s run

    I always wanted to watch that movie and never got around to it... I really like that you took it upon yourself to give Carrie a better ending. She had ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: It appears that the parents have arrived

    Alright here goes. The story I’ve been dreading. Poor Corbin is meeting the creepy pastas. And hoo boy do they make an entrance. Love the descriptions here. I feel like, ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Lucien’s walk through the graveyard

    Already I’m feeling for the MC here. Survivor’s guilt is no joke. Also that he thinks about that she doesn’t belong on a cemetery… Ahhh :( :( Oooh that is ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Worst part of Quintilis

    I really love the rhythm of your poem. Also the beginning draws on in immediately with the “I loved a lie”. I also like the image of raindrops writing memories ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Other Re: Finn’s story-Siren’s Desire

    Okay, I do have vague memories of these characters. Looking forward to learning more about them! Okkk he was kept locked up for the cold months Literally locked up? I ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: As Perdita digs a deep hole

    I know this has nothing to do with the story but I can’t help but have the lyrics for Devil on my Shoulder by Billy Talent on my mind. ~I ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Evanna-Alice and the aliens

    Hach, I really like the first sentence. It tells me so much that I need to know about this story and I am so here for it! That said, I ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 6

    I want to start with saying how pleasant the beginning of your chapter is. I like the flow of the sentences, even though I haven’t read any of the other ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: The vessel of the sin nothing

    Hi hello! Wanted to drop by with a review and my very first advise is: make paragraphs. A long text like this is very hard to read :) Is the ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Language of Dust

    So I read this and was concentrating on rhythm and stuff, without really understanding the meaning but then this comes: To leave, one must pay in grain, and suddenly everything ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Poetry » Horror, Romantic Re: In Memoriam

    My first question is actually why the lyrical narrator expects to be dug from her grave. I like the image of the heart now being blacker than the soil. I ...

    Nov 24, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: To Paxaria: part 9.0

    I feel very in the moment with your introductory descriptions this chapter 😊 Hm I also feel like this sentence is lacking in some way: so she could see everything ...

    Nov 24, 2025


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