Thisislegacy

Legacy here for a review. I like this humourous poem, but the obnoxious rhyming makes it almost painful to the eyes to read. It is more important for your poem ...

Legacy here for a review. I am so sorry that you feel this way, if you need someone to talk to please message me (I will message asap). I was ...

Legacy here for a review. I love your formatting for your poem. The last line you have is such a plot twist; I did not expect it at all. I ...

Legacy here for a review. I understand this poem in a spiritual way. I love how this shows how someone that is strong headed unintentionally hurts someone (a common trope) ...

Legacy here for a review. I love this poem so much. My favorite lines are "show color through different brush strokes and/ punching walls with broken hopes and dreams." I ...

Legacy here for a review. :) I agree with the other reviewer off the bat and propose that you don't even need the line "I feel so bad". I feel ...

Legacy here for a review. I dearly listen to music and it makes me feel bad when I'm too busy to listen; as music has saved my life many times. ...

Legacy here for a review. I love sonnets, although I am not good at writing them myself. I love the topic that you have written about as well since it ...

Legacy here for a review. This was very emotional for me. It almost made me cry. I have nothing negative to really say. You were able to display the emotion ...

Legacy here for a review. I love the concept that Heaven is the place in the title you are referring to. Imma be all over in this review from the ...

Legacy here for a review. This poem really hit me hard, good job (it takes a bit for me to get like that). I could really see your scene even ...

Legacy here for a review in no particular order. Okay so the first thing I notice is that towards the end you use a French phrase. I recommend that you ...

Legacy here for a review. Here's some basic and overall tips about your poem :) Okay, so I like the concept of your poem. But I dislike the formatting personally. ...

Legacy here for a review :) I like this poem but there are some definite (but small) things that could be fixed to make it even better. Let's get started ...

Legacy here for a review :) It seems like you are trying to paint a picture of a nighttime storm in the middle of the ocean. If so, you have ...