Hey there! It's ZeldaIsShiek here to review another quintessential piece of literature that made my day and win this Review Day by helping the Red Pandas stay in first place and reaching my goal of 80 reviews. I might even get to 100, if I work hard enough. I am really excited to review this amazing piece of art that you have created, and maybe add some witty humor as well. Anyway, that's enough idle chatter from me. Let's get into the review.
I understand the meaning behind this poem, and though I have had experience with this topic and have had friends that cut themselves, I am perfectly fine with reviewing your work. I liked how each line felt like a part of a process, and how you have to read the poem a few times to really understand what is happening.
Metal: A knife
Line: A cut that was caused by the knife
Blood beads: Blood rising from the cut that was caused by the knife
Breathe: Calm down
Repeat: Cut again
Do you see what I am saying? The entire poem feels like a process that you can't totally understand without reading tit multiple times. I really liked your poem, and I hope you write more like it soon. If this poem is a parody of real life, then I hope you find a better way to deal with your problems soon.
That's all for today. Keep writing amazing literature that inspires me to read and review them, and have a great Review Day! Let's beat the Blues once and for all!
~ZeldaIsShiek
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