TheWalkinDude

I agree with Pharnack as far as making the impression you want to get across more dominate and I agree with Ashley about this being open enough for others to ...

Howdy and welcome! Nice poem. I love the whole aspect of nature in this. It makes it more appealing and gentle, uplifting and nice to read. My only concern was: ...

heh, haikus... they make me smile. This is a good haiku, despite it not being about nature. The purpose of a haiku is typically to express things about nature. Not ...

I'm going to have to agree with Tedus about this poem; it was very good. What caught me about this poem was the subject, the idea. I like that underlying ...

This poem seemed a little drag to me. Too slow for what it is talking about. Maybe you could try adding some more figurative language and words that really jump ...

This poem was a little eerie to me. I mean, I like this poem and I like the message it brings across, mostly because I don't go to church and ...

On the dying verge of night, When everything was to be right . (There should really be a period here.) I was walking with my friend, Away from the trend, ...

Howdy, BTBW! Complete curveball. Hit straight outta left field. Resembling to the Taco Mayo Commercials (if you've never seen or heard of it, don't worry; they always do something completely ...

Well, I thought I had seen next to everything, and then you brig up a pyramid of words! Let me guess: is there a mummy made of grammar lurking inside? ...

Howdy, StoryWeaver! As far as problems go with this poem, I've got maybe one or two: Or has it all been done too many times before? I didn't like the ...

This poem made me laugh, and I'm being honest. This is a poem that I'm sure multiple people can relate to. Especially the part about seeing someone in the classroom ...

Congrats on the poem that stays on topic, bro. I hardly ever seem to run into poems like that anymore. Anyways, onto some things that need to be fixed: Refresh ...

Sweet poem, dude! I always like short and sweet poetry like this! Okay, now that that's out of the way, onto the real review: Sudden emptiness filled my mind, Her ...

Huh. Well, this is certainly something I've never read about, so that kind of tosses anything cliche out the window. It's very original and interesting to me. Now, as far ...

Heheh, this poem made me giggle, as it did everyone else here as well. I agree with you, about all the depressing poetry and writing, that is. I mean, I'm ...