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TheMissingPiece

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Once Upon a Hunger Games

    The Missing Piece here for a review! Wow, very creative! I love the hunger games and I found myself laughing at the last sentence. You used great vocabulary all through ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: The wind and the tree

    The Missing Piece here for a review! Wow! You have a great vocabulary! This is very pretty and runs smoothly. I can feel the emotion and you use such descriptive ...

    Mar 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Don't you Dare

    The Missing Piece here for a review! This was great! Lots of girls today starve, cut, and do stuff that harms themselves. This really shows how you feel about this ...

    Mar 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Forever

    The Missing Piece here for a review! Wow, this is beautiful. You can see the emotion in this story, did you, perhaps, write this when you where feeling so, alone? ...

    Mar 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Gun

    The Missing Piece here for a review! Woah, I love how this come right out and tells you the hard, cold truth, just like a gun is hard and cold. ...

    Feb 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Lady Emerald

    Hello! The Missing Piece here for a review! I absolutely loves this! It is very beautiful and unique! I didn't notice and grammar mistakes, so that's very good! Just, wow, ...

    Feb 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Nightmares

    The Missing Piece here for a review! I really love this poem because it really flows well and goes right with the theme, never going off track. I can imagine ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Hanging

    The Missing piece here for a review! I loved this because it flows easily and doesn't seem forced! I can picture the man about to be hanged and I can ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Shapely

    The Missing piece here for a review! I really loved this because I honestly can't do a shape poem! I am terrible at that sort of things so I can ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Eyes Open

    I-I don't know what to say. It's beautiful. I can't criticize it. Recently a boy killed himself in my home town. I wish someone would have stopped him. This speaks ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: The Hunger Games: After Mockingjay: Gale comes back

    The Missing piece here for a review! I really loved this because it really shows Gale's pain. It is so descriptive! Its beautiful! I always thought that Gale should've come ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fanfiction Re: Everlark- After Mockingjay

    The Missing piece here for a review! THIS WAS AMAZING! I really loved it! I didn't see any grammar mistakes so that's good. But I'm not that good with grammar ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fanfiction Re: Hayffie- After Mockingjay

    The Missing Piece here for a review! I loved this! I mean I would have NEVER thought to write about Effie's future! It's AMAZING! I didn't notice any grammar mistakes ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: Hunger Games Fanfic: Odesta short story

    The Missing piece here for a review! I LOVE THE HUNGER GAMES! OMG! This is such a good and sad story! I just love it! OMG AMAZING. Okay now I'm ...

    Jan 14, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If Music Were a Person

    The Missing Piece here for a review! I love this! I love this so much because its true! If music really was a person that is exactly how he's be! ...

    Jan 8, 2014


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