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Re: Once Upon a Hunger Games
The Missing Piece here for a review! Wow, very creative! I love the hunger games and I found myself laughing at the last sentence. You used great vocabulary all through ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: The wind and the tree
The Missing Piece here for a review! Wow! You have a great vocabulary! This is very pretty and runs smoothly. I can feel the emotion and you use such descriptive ...
Mar 3, 2014 -
Re: Don't you Dare
The Missing Piece here for a review! This was great! Lots of girls today starve, cut, and do stuff that harms themselves. This really shows how you feel about this ...
Mar 3, 2014 -
Re: Forever
The Missing Piece here for a review! Wow, this is beautiful. You can see the emotion in this story, did you, perhaps, write this when you where feeling so, alone? ...
Mar 3, 2014 -
Re: The Gun
The Missing Piece here for a review! Woah, I love how this come right out and tells you the hard, cold truth, just like a gun is hard and cold. ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: Lady Emerald
Hello! The Missing Piece here for a review! I absolutely loves this! It is very beautiful and unique! I didn't notice and grammar mistakes, so that's very good! Just, wow, ...
Feb 12, 2014 -
Re: Nightmares
The Missing Piece here for a review! I really love this poem because it really flows well and goes right with the theme, never going off track. I can imagine ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: The Hanging
The Missing piece here for a review! I loved this because it flows easily and doesn't seem forced! I can picture the man about to be hanged and I can ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: Shapely
The Missing piece here for a review! I really loved this because I honestly can't do a shape poem! I am terrible at that sort of things so I can ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Open
I-I don't know what to say. It's beautiful. I can't criticize it. Recently a boy killed himself in my home town. I wish someone would have stopped him. This speaks ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: The Hunger Games: After Mockingjay: Gale comes back
The Missing piece here for a review! I really loved this because it really shows Gale's pain. It is so descriptive! Its beautiful! I always thought that Gale should've come ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: Everlark- After Mockingjay
The Missing piece here for a review! THIS WAS AMAZING! I really loved it! I didn't see any grammar mistakes so that's good. But I'm not that good with grammar ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: Hayffie- After Mockingjay
The Missing Piece here for a review! I loved this! I mean I would have NEVER thought to write about Effie's future! It's AMAZING! I didn't notice any grammar mistakes ...
Jan 15, 2014 -
Re: Hunger Games Fanfic: Odesta short story
The Missing piece here for a review! I LOVE THE HUNGER GAMES! OMG! This is such a good and sad story! I just love it! OMG AMAZING. Okay now I'm ...
Jan 14, 2014 -
Re: If Music Were a Person
The Missing Piece here for a review! I love this! I love this so much because its true! If music really was a person that is exactly how he's be! ...
Jan 8, 2014
