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Hey EthanHoover! Me again. Using silent commands to tell a robot what to do when it could potentially just do things of its own accord is such a bad idea. ...

Oh no. Oh no! When I read about that feature of N.E.R.O my first thought was 'well, that's going to become problematic at some point, it's a good thing the ...

Hey EthanHoover! This is a really interesting premise. New earth style stories (I assume that's where they're going) are so interesting because absolutely anything could happen and it immediately crea

Hey Raesvaughn! If I'm honest, I found this piece a little bit hard to really connect with. I think it's because it starts off very grand. A not-human not-god trapped ...

Hey Em16 This is pretty intense. It's full of a lot of raw emotion. I like the topic as a whole. I feel like a lot of poetry tends to ...

Hi Beautiful Sparkle! There are a lot of complex dynamics going on in this poem and I like that a lot. It's a little bit ambiguous as to which of ...

Hey Shadeflame! Firstly, I'm a huge fan of concrete poetry. The shape of this is pretty simple but it has shape and I love that. It just adds an extra ...

Hey Blank89 Snazzy title =] It's clever. He frowned and opened the duffel bag filled with cash, maybe about 3,000 dollars. This line got me. I love it. In general, ...

Hey Luna! This piece is huge! About 10,000 words in length? Credit to you, that's brilliant to be able to finish a work of that length. It's a lot to ...

Hey Gnomish! I think this could be improved a lot by getting rid of a lot of the -ing words and switching them to -ed. It's best to try sticking ...

Hi Queenie! I love the format of this. The repitition and the rhyming scheme that crosses through the stanzas is intricate and feels like it would have taken a long ...

Hi SpinTWOfortune. Welcome to YWS! Here's a few quick tips just to get this tidied up and give the quality a really easy boost; - Either let the beginning of ...

So pretty! I really like how each verse adds more context to the verse and kind of changes the meaning slightly. The concept is really interesting. I'd say it might ...

Amazing vocals and a beautiful composition. I think it takes a lot of skill to write and compose something of this quality, especially to do the tech stuff behind it ...

I agree with the other comments, Summers voice is fantastic. You've captured that beautifully awkward medley of adolescent emotions really well. I really liked the part where she was imagining ...