Temptress

Hiya! Temptress here to give you a review on this lovely review day! First off I'd like to say how much I liked this poem. I really felt the emotion ...

Hello! Temptress here to give you a reveiw :3 First off I'd like to apoligize in advance in case I offend you in any way. I'd also like to say ...

Hiya! Temptress here to give a review! So let's get started shall we? So first thing I noticed was you have capitalized every beginning word: "Black" "Make" "Secrets," etc... Despite ...

Hiya! Temptress here to give a review. I'd like to first say that I enjoyed this poem a lot. I found it very interesting and it seemed very well written ...

Hiya! Temptress here to give a review! So I overall thought this poem was very well written and it only has one or two things I'd like to point at. ...

Temptress here to give a review! So the first thing I noticed right off the bat was your use of 'i' I is usually always capitalized so if there was ...

Hiya! Temptress here to give a review! First of all i'd like to say is I can relate to this and I enjoyed it a lot. So the main thing ...

Hiya! Temptress here to give a review! So, first of all I'd just like to say I found your poem very interesting and I really enjoyed it. Now on to ...

Hiya! Temptress here to give you a review! So the first thing I'd like to say is that as I was reading this poem, my anxiety spiked up. (Which isn't ...

Hiya! Temptress here! So, the first thing that came to my mind when I read this was "Self Harm" especially after I read the words "Metal," "Line," And "Blood beads" ...

Hiya! Temptress here! First of all, I'd like to say that this poem hit me hard. Mainly because I can relate to it. At least to my understanding of the ...

Hiya! Temptress here to give a review! First of all, I love this poem because it's so relatable to me. I feel like a 'hurricane' or depressed and suicidal sometimes, ...

Hiya! Temptress here to give you a review! First of all, I really love this poem. One of the first things I noticed was some capitalization errors, or maybe it ...

Hi! Temptress here! To give you a quick review! Let's get started, shall we? First of all, I really enjoyed the poem and overall I thought it was really good. ...

Hiya snowmonkey9! Temptress here to give you a review! Let's begin, shall we? I didn't notice any grammar/spelling mistakes so that's always good. I can definitely relate to this on ...