Tay01

Well yes, I would be eager for part 2. I think that you made quite a big grammatical error. Your whole story was in present tense. i thought like, you ...

Hello this is Tay01 here with a little review of your poem. I think, overall, this poem is pretty good. I think that your words, one point each stanza. Please ...

Well, this is great. I really liked this. Poems are fun and easy to review, in my opinion. Thank you. Well, this girl is strange. She is weird, she is ...

Wait, what is this? Did you write this exactly like this or did your computer do this? I know it somehow fits the title, computer, but this is like your ...

Sometimes, you need to work on your past tense. There are some present tenses that need to be corrected as stories are always told/wrote in past tense. However, this is ...

Wow, this is nice. Not as interesting as the Chapter 1 part 2. That was way better, and more exciting. As I've mentioned, you have TOO many Italics. Your words ...

I really think that this is a really good piece. you even translated it into French for any of the French people out there on Young Writers Society. You rhyme ...

Well, Helloooooo, this is Tay01 here and thank you for reading this review of mine, and you would want to, because, why not? First, you write pretty good here. I ...

Wow Wow Wow! This is me, Tay01. I must see part 1! Please, please, please, please send me the link to part 1. I cannot stand it anymore. I must ...

Wow, well straight to the point of your poem right here. To start with, your poem is pretty much every childhood's life. And if I were to write this poem, ...

Hey, Tay01, Lover and Number 1 Greatest Fan of the old animated film, Finding Nemo. Here with a review about your piece that was suppose to blow my mind, and ...

Okay not too bad for me I suppose. Nothing I can say now to improve. I can just telll you it is nice. And I know I am a bit ...

Hahahahahaha! Helloooo! This is Tay 01 here lover and great fan of an old film, Finding Nemo. And Hohoho! Hold your horses there, I see a funny poem coming haha. ...

Wow this is really, okay. I think. Not too bad because it is about the unknown one. Hahahahaha! Quite lame jokes I make some times, and nobody gets it....... Anyway, ...

Hello, Tay01 here with a little review. No, not to show you how to improve, but to admire your great work. As I have just said, I am only admiring ...