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Tammi

  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: The Coliseum Can Crumble

    Awwww..okay, i know that is not how you start a review but it was my first reaction to this beautiful story. Hello! I want you to know this that this ...

    Mar 21, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Two dolls

    Hello! A good poem but not a very good one. I like the concept that you put forward in the last stanza. "I buried the dolls... what's the point of ...

    Mar 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Micayla

    Hey! I don't think i can give you any tips on this poem as it is about being imperfectly perfect. So, is this poem: imperfectly perfect. But it sounds as ...

    Mar 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Deception Of The Mind

    Hey! I like your work because it left me with a happy uneasy feeeling, and this is the feeling that i get after reading Tagore's stories(just in case you don't ...

    Mar 21, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Corruption

    Hey! I need to say this-"I AM IMPRESSED!!" you have chosen such an important theme. Everyone knows about corruption, reads about it and often experiences it, but the pity is ...

    Mar 16, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Perfect is not Perfect

    HEY THERE! wonderful poem! must say. I assume that this poem is about joys in life, which come but are momentary and always cost you much part of your happiness. ...

    Mar 13, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: The Wanted and Unwanted

    Hello! I appreciate your efforts to make death look "good" in the last paragraph, but that seriously didn't convince me. :P Now firstly let me give you an overall idea ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Special Someone

    HALLO! you made my day(even though its evening already) ;P Its a beautiful, peaceful, encouraging, simple and sober poem. Basically the kind i appreciate the most simply, because they connect ...

    Mar 2, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Doubt

    Hello! (get ready for being killed) I LIKE YOUR POEM. not to mention how good i felt and how i could relate myself with the content which has been so ...

    Mar 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Do Not Touch the Display

    Hey! After a long time i came across a poem i re-read, not because i wanted to examine it but simply as it fascinated me! Well, the title gave me ...

    Mar 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No God

    Good Day Chap! I like your poem, i really do! and the irony used is awesome! there's just a little suggestion from my side, that you should really consider the ...

    Feb 20, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Some Days...

    hey mate! So this poem gives a lot of hint about broken relationship and i don't know why, atheism?! Anyways, to begin with the review this poem has a melancholic ...

    Feb 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: The Glass Door

    Heya! this is one of the most sensible poems i have ever read. It has some deeper sides but from an overlook it SOUNDS FANTASTIC!! the ending was just so ...

    Oct 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Beyond Words

    I like how you have beautifully put into words those feelings that are too tough to express. The emotions you have tried to express are too genuine. the refrain is ...

    Oct 14, 2015


We are great at fearing the wrong things.
— Hank Green