TakeThatYouFiend

Hello! This is very nice, but has a couple of minor flaws. Firstly though, my favorite bit. (drumroll) "cold but beautiful" Yeah, I know it is only a small bit, ...

This is amazing! Firstly, 6 likes and still in the green room is abnormal, and secondly, you have only been on since the 22nd! The rhyme scheme works extremely well, ...

Awesome picture-is it your own? A few words on the writing style-I can find no flaw anywhere in this piece, which is surprising. I like particularly the way you began ...

This is amazing! I love this poem! I was initially drawn in by the description, who can resist review at your own risk? It's like a wet paint sign or ...

Hello! Very well done here, it's like that poem you wrote describing the sky in terms of painting, only tastier! Fourth line: it says "is beginning to", but as I ...

Hello Timmy! me again! *waves* (sudden thought-if you read this review first then "me for the first time! *waves") This, I gather, is a reasonably old poem, and is pretty ...

Hello! *waves* Right, I aggree with the point you make about the length, a good thing you included the authors note, or this review would be pointless. O.k. a negative ...

Hello! *waves* O.k. I find this kinda hard to read as poetry, but I will try to review this without prejudice. In the whole piece I could find but two ...

And yet another greeting! *waves* This is O.K., although I am not a big lyrics fan when I don't know the tune. What do you mean in the last line ...

Hello again! *another wave* I liked this poem, for the following reasons; The rhythm was fine, I could find no fault with it. Each line ends on a natural break ...

Hello! *waves* This was a truly fine poem, and I can find nothing to criticize. (kinda hard in seventeen syllables). So rather I will say what I particularly liked. -I ...

If you don't continue this now, I will kill you! There are a couple of points I would correct. "A collection of wealthy cities tired of being under the jackboot ...

Hello, this is great TGS, possibly your best work yet! What I like: -The rhythm works really well for most of the piece. -The switch over between the actual reflected ...

Love the old English! (*hums Rule Britannia*) O.k. I may be slightly bias to old English-what with my Shakespearean/Dickensian writing style, but I still like it. The rhyme scheme is ...

Hello, this is really great, and the rhythm has been improved since I last heard it. This is a perfect length, as, as one of those "life guidance" poems, it ...