TakeThatYouFiend

This is my favorite of your poems so far, and unlike the last I reviewed, not at all gloomy, and even rather humourous! :-) First of, I will give you ...

What was I just saying about depressing poems?!? This is very good, this much is obvious, despite short poems not being my area of expertise. The thing I do know ...

Greetings on this fine review day! (Go Blue!) This is a nice poem, and you have two major strengths. Firstly, your rhythm. This poem read extremely easily, and the rhythm ...

This was very nice, even if the first line was slightly creepy! :-) (I blame GM foods) The best verse was undoubtedly the third, as it symbolizes something widely relatable ...

Oooh, suspense! I have a mere two criticisms, and I shall leave your vivid imagination and my previous reviews to fill in the prase. The first of these two minor ...

I have to admit, this is definitely not what I expected. The title drew me in, due to the fact I am a board game freak (third class.). However, despite ...

Generally I don't look at the spotlight without out a reason, like a really catchy title or something by someone I know, but this has been here for a while, ...

There shouldn't be a space after "double-" in double-doors the hyphen works instead of a space. At a guess it was your computer's fault. You don't necessarily nee d the ...

I see you have a poetry-migrating cold cup of coffee! I think that simile fits this poem better, as this seems a little more down too earth. The phrase itself ...

This is very good, and a remarkable first poem! Me being nitpicky: Paper isn't square! Well, yes some is, but generally square jars with my inner paper monster. A couple ...

I would just like to say that the above arguments are held, but not by all. You cannot argue about a belief because it spawns evil, or because it cannot ...

Hello! this is my clever method of giving you a hunger games wake-up call! This, I believe, a new genre, although it is closely related to poetry. So if I ...

Hello Timmyjake! This works really well, and I like it. Firstly I am initially glad it is not about depression or love. Secondly the message is clear, well thought out, ...

This is really nice, and I am glad to say I have never had experience in such matters. The only thing I don't really agree with, and this is opinion ...

Greetings! O.k. I always find Haiku difficult to review because they are so short, so give me a little lea-way. "Dead words fill my bones;" Great way to start, with ...