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Re: Psychiatric
It's penned based on the loneliness of an individual It's so touching that ot brought tears in my eyes.its like showingy own mirror. My own story. But now I've changed ...
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Re: Poem: An Analysis
Woooooooooowwwwwwww. I liked the penning. It's simply nice . And the most touching lines are... " This is not my cup of tea and I cannot drink that. " So ...
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Re: Inside My Bag
Beautifully penned emotions. Its on a relationship which doesn't work AND then after it's over .. a hope to find another. Substitute to live happily or one can think so ...
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Re: to my parents, who will never like me
Hey dear ! Its so very true story in this poem . What to say in review . You make me lost in words. Simply mindblowing, awesomely carved and very ...
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Re: Edged Ecstacy
Hey elcuidador ! I really like the way you pen down your thoughts. The way you carve down your feelings is nice. You know I felt it's very traditional form ...
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Re: Poor Girl
Hey ! I know to give a review is the hardest thing as I've to quote weak points of another writer. So here I go.. You need to capitalize word ...
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Re: Dandruff
Hello Hadj ! I dont know in what mood you've written this. May be hilarious or...but in my point of view it's Touchy ..very very touchy . I dont know ...
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Re: Am I Slow?
Ahaaan ! Hey dear ! I totally agree with Tammi . It could be sung better as a duet. Nice words , nice lyrics I mean.wish I could soon hear ...
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Re: Filtered
In review I want to clarifye a thing. I myself is not so good in penning but I can feel by reading. A reader loose interest if any piece of ...
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Re: I need fixing
I am here to review your really looooooong poem. Its depressing, sad but too realistic. I can feel it as I myself can relate to it . The very first ...
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Re: hold on
I want to say few lines in my review . Sad poem abouy a confused mind though. But very naturally explained. The words you choose are acurate according to the ...
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Re: Cuz...'not you' ( Experimental poetry 1.1)
Hello Taha ! Frankly saying . I'm feeling very umm what to say. I am confused actually. I don't understand what you have penned. Its a different level of carving ...
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Re: Living
Ahaan brave ! Amazingly awesome piece. You've beautifully carved the words in your penning. And your starting is just great. I love it. "I exist This is undeniably true." And ...
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Re: A poem dedicated for a mother's love
Loads 'n' loads of lovely blessings for you Ayush! I want to review but being so touched by the words you carved I can't. I just say Woooooooooowwwwwwww! Speechless otherwise ...
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Re: to derive the moon of sight.
Hey dear ! So you want a review. Okey ! Ummmmm but there are very few punctuation mistake or in capitalization at some places of some words. Otherwise I dont ...
Apr 3, 2016
