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Re: What Is Christmas All About?
A very light and hilarious poem, @Horisun. Honestly, amazing. I loved it. There are, however, some things that I caught while reading that I would like to point out. Let's ...
Dec 23, 2019 -
Re: Love Me
Great literary piece, @KaPo21! It's wonderful! I did notice a couple of things while reading, however. Remember, there's always room for improvement! ※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※â€
Dec 23, 2019 -
Re: burning bridges
Hi, @erilea! I really enjoyed reading this poem. You can tell you put a lot of effort into it. Though, I have caught a few things that definitely made it ...
Dec 23, 2019 -
Re: Storm
Hello, @brookeallo! This is a very good poem. You definitely have a talent in literature! There aren't that many mistakes that I caught. This is a very short literary piece, ...
Dec 22, 2019 -
Re: Dear Life
@brookeallo, Wow, this is amazing! By far, one of my favorite poems I have read, like, ever. If this is what you're going through right now, I am very sorry, ...
Dec 22, 2019 -
Re: By his side (CHRISTmas poem)
@stinastobi, A very lovely poem you've written there! I can tell that you had put plenty of effort into it. However, while I was reading, I saw a few things ...
Dec 21, 2019 -
Re: yet
Wow, @AvantCoffee! What an amazing poem! You are, clearly, very good at poetry. However, there's always room for improvement. How about we get right into it, shall we? I am ...
Oct 20, 2019 -
Re: Lie
Hi there, @Bellarke! It is I, @SuperOriginalName here with a review of your amazing work. Shall we begin? This is a very good poem. I really enjoyed reading it! If ...
Oct 14, 2019 -
Re: ever seen a hat on a table?
Hi, @Hat Table! This is @SuperOriginalName here today to send you a review, based in this piece of literature. I think that this was a very nice (and funny) poem, ...
Oct 12, 2019 -
Re: Rising Just To Fall
Such a great poem! I really like the theme of it. However, I did see a few flaws in it. Don't worry, it happens to the best of us. I ...
Sep 19, 2019 -
Re: Light steps
Dear @Here, This is such a great poem! I can tell how much effort you put into your work, and I appreciate that. However, this is a review, and I ...
Sep 15, 2019 -
Re: Euphoria
Dear @kai.ezra, I can relate to what you are going through right now. I hope you feel better soon. This is a very good poem, but I would like to ...
Sep 15, 2019 -
Re: eat the moon
Dear @Anamel, I don't even know what to say. This is really good! I was skeptical at first, maybe because the description is, literally, "idk." It could of also been ...
Sep 15, 2019 -
Re: I Bite my nails
Dear LukeRH, Wow. This is such a great poem!! Believe it or not, it was actually quite relatable and almost brought me into tears. However, as you know, this is ...
Sep 15, 2019 -
Re: This is the last time
Dear Dossereana, This is a extremely good poem! If this is what you are going through right now, then I hope you get through it all. Anyway, I hope you ...
Sep 14, 2019
