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  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: What Is Christmas All About?

    A very light and hilarious poem, @Horisun. Honestly, amazing. I loved it. There are, however, some things that I caught while reading that I would like to point out. Let's ...

    Dec 23, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Love Me

    Great literary piece, @KaPo21! It's wonderful! I did notice a couple of things while reading, however. Remember, there's always room for improvement! ※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※※â€

    Dec 23, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: burning bridges

    Hi, @erilea! I really enjoyed reading this poem. You can tell you put a lot of effort into it. Though, I have caught a few things that definitely made it ...

    Dec 23, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Storm

    Hello, @brookeallo! This is a very good poem. You definitely have a talent in literature! There aren't that many mistakes that I caught. This is a very short literary piece, ...

    Dec 22, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Life

    @brookeallo, Wow, this is amazing! By far, one of my favorite poems I have read, like, ever. If this is what you're going through right now, I am very sorry, ...

    Dec 22, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: By his side (CHRISTmas poem)

    @stinastobi, A very lovely poem you've written there! I can tell that you had put plenty of effort into it. However, while I was reading, I saw a few things ...

    Dec 21, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: yet

    Wow, @AvantCoffee! What an amazing poem! You are, clearly, very good at poetry. However, there's always room for improvement. How about we get right into it, shall we? I am ...

    Oct 20, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Lie

    Hi there, @Bellarke! It is I, @SuperOriginalName here with a review of your amazing work. Shall we begin? This is a very good poem. I really enjoyed reading it! If ...

    Oct 14, 2019
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: ever seen a hat on a table?

    Hi, @Hat Table! This is @SuperOriginalName here today to send you a review, based in this piece of literature. I think that this was a very nice (and funny) poem, ...

    Oct 12, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Rising Just To Fall

    Such a great poem! I really like the theme of it. However, I did see a few flaws in it. Don't worry, it happens to the best of us. I ...

    Sep 19, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Light steps

    Dear @Here, This is such a great poem! I can tell how much effort you put into your work, and I appreciate that. However, this is a review, and I ...

    Sep 15, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, Literature Re: Euphoria

    Dear @kai.ezra, I can relate to what you are going through right now. I hope you feel better soon. This is a very good poem, but I would like to ...

    Sep 15, 2019
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: eat the moon

    Dear @Anamel, I don't even know what to say. This is really good! I was skeptical at first, maybe because the description is, literally, "idk." It could of also been ...

    Sep 15, 2019
  • Poetry » Literature, Other Re: I Bite my nails

    Dear LukeRH, Wow. This is such a great poem!! Believe it or not, it was actually quite relatable and almost brought me into tears. However, as you know, this is ...

    Sep 15, 2019
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: This is the last time

    Dear Dossereana, This is a extremely good poem! If this is what you are going through right now, then I hope you get through it all. Anyway, I hope you ...

    Sep 14, 2019


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