StoryWeaver13

Hey there, wonderland! I'm StoryWeaver, here to review! Anyway, I like this story, but I do feel as though there is some definite room for improvement. It is bursting with ...

The snow fell through the air, landing on the white ground, or playing and winding through the bare oak trees of winters age. [[First of all, omit the word "white." ...

Hey there! Well, first off, this should probably (technically) be under "Poetry" as opposed to being in the short story section, and I think I would've preferred that it was ...

This was unexpectedly sad. Huh. I think I'm going to walk to the nearest corner and sob now... Or I'll just review this, I guess. That works too. But really, ...

Hey, Sakura, I'm here to review. :] So, I feel like this was a bit dry/overdone. I didn't really feel any impact until the last line (at which point I ...

Hey there! Like dogs, I also came from your last poem, so I'll probably carry a bit of bias with me in reviewing this one as well. That being said, ...

Hey, here to review! First of all, I love the concept; really, it is great, and you worked around it pretty well. Still, I feel as though you need to ...

Unrequited hipster love...sad/ashamed to say that I can relate... This poem was dripping with brilliant lines, I must say. You're right when you say it's rough, but there is just ...

Hey there Rydia, here to review! This is such a great concept, and I love the mythological references. While some lines were a little stilted in their syllables, I think ...

Hey! Here to review!~ My pretty little heart [While I feel like there's a bit of an eye-roll implied, I find it kind of odd you'd call your own heart ...

As soon as I saw the title, I thought, "John Green!" And I was right. XD Anyway, mutual fandoms aside, I'm here to review your poem! star crossed across the ...

Hollowed and gaunt [,] the girl of sixteen smiles [ - ] they can see it in her eyes [What is this "it?"] flat and broken [This image sticks out ...

I like this quite a lot...I substituted my own tune, and even though I wish I knew what it *actually* sounds like, it wasn't hard to make the song cohesive. ...

Well, well, well. I like this story a lot; it's well-written and shows plenty of promise. I wanted to read more as soon as I reached the last word. Your ...

Hey, here to review! So I have really mixed emotions about this poem. It shows a lot of promise, but I feel like it's just not quite cleaned up yet. ...