Stori

I second that motion! Come one, Redwall is one thing... And pl-ease. Have you ever read Pendragon by D.J. McHale? The Travelers always had a stash of each territory's clothing ...

Calix! I'm so glad to see you again. Hey, this song reminds me of a friend I had a while ago. You captured what it is to miss someone very ...

Not everyone has to start out an expert. I was expecting this to rhyme, but you pleasantly surprised me. Not much to critique here; I'll send you a gift instead.

Not at all. You can even forget my suggestion.

Two minutes, of course!

Maybe the main character should ask for help from Percy and his friends? It's a good way to show the "fan" element in this work.

Beautiful. As I read this, I could hear it being sung in my head.

What he said. Also, since there are so many races in Star Wars, perhaps you should include a short list.

Darn it. I expected Riley to talk, but not this. Kudos.

Um.. thanks for the review?

This remind me of Shel Silverstein's poems. Kudos for that. H'm. Not much I can say about it, otherwise.

One doesn't often find writing about sparrows. Well done! People things "People and things" works so much better. That's all I found.

Good show! Oh, and we have the same name, Story. Imagine that! When I was child on my visit last This should be "When I was a child". Other than ...

Is this what they call stream of consciousness? When I first saw that you mentioned school, I thought that was your main focus. But it isn't.

Interesting. Near the end of the poem, you wrote, "Maybe someday he'll open my eyes." Did you mean to say "his eyes" or is this talking about a revalation?