A Haiku

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Yes, even I have been infected by the haiku bug. Here goes.

Give me a minute
And I'll change your life, just watch.
Two, and we'll see. Right?

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Stori
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Two minutes, of course!

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Pacific_Sky14
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I agree with Durrie! :) Two what? I don't really know haiku's, but it's alright!!^>^

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Durriedog
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Hey! I like it. The only nitpick -

'Two, and we'll see. Right?'

Two what?

Keep writing!

~Durr :smt023



Today I bent the truth to be kind, and I have no regret, for I am far surer of what is kind than I am of what is true.
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