StoneHeart

Hey Caroline! Black here for your requested review! (Sorry this took so long, this is a big piece and I needed to do a good job!). Okay, so first off: ...

Hey Silented! Black here for your requested review! Okay, so to tell you the truth I usually try to avoid poetry because I have absolutely no sense of flow and ...

Hey Tenyo! Black here for your requested review! Okay, so first off I'm going to admit it. I'm impressed. Usually I just 'like' a piece, but this wasn't something that ...

Hey Strange, Black here for your requested review! Okay, this was, ahem, completely ridiculous. In other words: I loved it. You have a really great way of building up the ...

Hey Skins, Black here for your requested review! Oooookay! First off: I'm impressed! Your grammar is REALLY good; it really seems to go well with your story. Overall it seems ...

Hey Rainn! Black here for your requested review! Okay, so first thing's first, I really liked the poem. And you know what? For once in a very long time I ...

Okay, hey Paracosm, Black here for a Review Day review! Well, first off I loved this piece. Henry is a very good character, driven, but not powerful. He's got a ...

Hey Erica! Black dropping by for a really quick comment. Firs off I really enjoyed this piece! Your originality is really nice (earth invaded by demons is a whole new ...

Hey Spark, Black here for a quick Review Day review! Okay, this was nice! Very nice. Your style and pacing are REALLY good, though I did catch a couple of ...

Okay, hey zasaz, Black here for a real quick Review Day review! Okay, so first off . . . this was, ahem, a bit of an odd piece. Not the ...

~Black~ Hey CJ! Black here for a quick Review Day review! Okay, so, AMAZING piece here! Your style is incredibly formal, but formal in a good way, extremely well used! ...

Hey Juju! Black here for a Review Day review! (Coming in the hopes I can help you to fix your writing :P) Okay, so, I'm going to be sounding a ...

XD, hey Griffin, Black here for a REALLY quick Review day review! Okay, so what you're using is called circular logic, going around and around because there's no solution to ...

Okay, I've gotta give my team a few points here so this review is going to be minimal size. >> I've already covered pretty much everything there is to cover ...

Hey Gaurav, Black here for a Review Day review! (BTW -really enjoying this book/ story, a lot. I wanna know more :P) All right! First off: Nice work. Your action ...