Hello!
Umm.. I just read it and am thinking " what the f***" i read"... I don't know, but it's maybe not for me, because i don't understand what you want to say. Also it sounds really creepy. hah It's like you gonna kill that poor girl. You know, it's just my opinion, but it's not a good work and those "lyrics" are not lyrics. I think you could create somethig better
- Ophelia
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