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Re: Marion Barnes – Doctor of Physical Therapy
Hey Mabyn! Black here for a quick review day review for ya! So, this was an interesting piece. Why was it interesting: Well I don't usually read non-fiction on YWS ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Burned Shirts and Shorter Skirts - Prologue
Hey Danteke, Black here for your requested review (Sorry it's a bit late, but believe me, I've been later!). Okay, so I'm going to say that for a first jump ...
Aug 21, 2013 -
Re: A bit delusional.
Hey Canary, Black here for a quick review for ya! Okay, so nice work here. The title, 'A bit delusional' really fits it nicely! I really enjoyed! You have powerful ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: A Worrisome Heart of Something Great
Hey Lama, Black finally here for your requested review. I have one guarantee when you ask a review of me: Lateness. Lots of it. Sorry. Okay, so I'm going to ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: i never lernd to spel good
Ah this was great! We dear humans must start to learn our method of communication when we are VERY young. It's no wonder the whole thing is SO complicated, huh? ...
Aug 10, 2013 -
Re: Old
Hey Skins! Black here for your requested review! Sorry that I took so long in getting here, and sorry this isn't a really big review, but I don't have a ...
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: I need to write.
Hah, wow you really caught my mood today Cailey! Are you stalking my mind O.o First: I really like how you wrote this, as a conversation between these two people/ ...
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: Worlds Apart (Chapter 1)
Hey Mystogan, Black here for your requested review! Sorry I'm so late, I've been really busy. My apologies. Okay, so first off: WOW> Right now I have one thought about ...
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: Romancing The Devil: Chapter Seven
Hey Katy, Black here for a quick comment (which turned out to be a review). I really enjoy your writing and style, as I've told you before. I love your ...
Aug 3, 2013 -
Re: Peer Jumping
Heya Ben! Black here for a quick review/ look-over. Allright, seeing as a lot of people have suggested this too me (and you asked for it), I'm going to forgo ...
Aug 3, 2013 -
Re: The Scientist
Hey Hero, Black here for a quick review! Okay! So this was great! It had a lot of power-meat to it that I really appreciated. It was just chocked full ...
Aug 3, 2013 -
Re: The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Three)
Hey Skins, Black here for your requested review. Okay, so first off: I seriously liked this chapter more than the previous one. You've got a great way of compacting the ...
Jul 31, 2013 -
Re: Adventures of the SPEW Cat's Eye (Ch.1 Sc. 1)
Hey Grif, Black here for a real quick comment/ review. So, I really enjoyed this. I love it how you turn YWS into a whole world like this, with the ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Qualm Meadow Chapter 16 (tidbit)
Hey Champ, Black back for a real quick comment/ review (yeah, this time it's really gonna be quick). This here chapter tidbit had many of the same problems of the ...
Jul 28, 2013 -
Re: Qualm Meadow Chapter 15 (tidbit)
Hey Champ, Black here for a quick review day review. So, first off: As much as I love your writing and style, and as great a writer as you are, ...
Jul 28, 2013