SpiritedWolfe

Hey, Noelle! I'm finally here after being soooo behind. So, I may do something's where I stop right in the middle of reading to jot something down so I don't ...

Hey, RP! *swuish-hugs* I AM SO PROUD OF YOU. Your dialogue has gotten so much better, it's amazing. It's tons better with more emotion in it (well, more so than ...

Hey, RP! I'm going to sort of do the commentary as I read thing again, because this really stood out to me. The very first sentence feels so not empowered. ...

Hey R4! THANK YOU. OH GOODNESS. THE DIALOGUE BEAST HAS RECEEDES. *cough* I read the first line and it makes sense with what was just finished off in the last ...

Hey, R4! One thousand... What? How do one thousand hobbits fit into that tiny road place? There isn't enough description of the area to really show how many there are. ...

Hey, R4! (Totally didn't call you RP on accident last time. Nope.) After reading your first line, the first thing I think of is the trend that most of your ...

Hey, RP! Alright. So I see there's still a ton of dialogue, but it's much better shortened up. I like the discussions a lot better than just then rambling on ...

Hey, R4~ I'm finally back and ready to review! So, I may seem a little harsher on this and more confused than normal, since 1. I haven't read this is ...

Oh, look! We have another character to be introduced to without having our questions answered about the last one. Joy. Hey, Pomp! Despite my irritated sounding introduction, this was perfect ...

Hey, Pomp! How am I supposed to critique this master piece? Honestly, this is my favorite part of all of them, having a much better balance between description and narration ...

Hey, Pomp! Why is this so beautiful? Goodness, I totally had things to say too, and then by the time I got to the end, I completely forgotten it all. ...

Hey, Pomp! I have returned to try and do my best to critique. One tiny thing really threw me off guard, so much so that I went back to the ...

Hey, Noelle! Whoa. That ending though. Though there's so many thing going on in this that I have no idea what they are, just they way you convey them, give ...

Hey, Adrian! I'm not really sure I like this part. The main parts which I really liked are at towards the bottom, giving us, the readers, a synopsis of what's ...

I've finally made it! Heyo, Pomp ~ Well. This is difficult with what you have here and aaaall those other review below here, but if you don't mind, I'll say ...