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Re: Misery or Humanity Chapter 10
Hey, Rocket! There was no way I could have known what was going to happen next. Yes, I realize Rosey pointed this out right before me, but this is a ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Misery or Humanity Chapter 9
Hey, rocket! So, it has been quite some time since I last read anything from your novel here, but I did go back a reread some of the parts and ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: After All the Cleaning
Alright. This. What did I just read? Hey, Katya and Raven Adrian! Ready for a review to shred this? OK! To start it off, the very first verse of this ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Alpha: TWG- Chapter 1
Hey, Artemis! I'm finally back to review this part of the novel in this series. I remember having read this through once a while ago, and I'm not entirely up ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Untitled,. - Chapter 2
Hey, iThy! Wolf here to be your review for today. Welcome to YWS ;) So, before I even start reading, I notice the big chunks of paragraphs, being really dense ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 4
Hey, Noelle! Why must you leave us with this now? ;-; Well, I was obviously very wrong about Dorrin not being powerful. Very. Very. Very wrong. It's really intriguing actually, ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 3
Hey, Noelle! I'm going to kill Akia for being such an idiot. *is only a couple paragraphs in* So, obviously she didn't take those certain precautions to make sure no ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 2
Well that answers my question of does Rhys even know the man's name... Hey, Noelle! STUFFS DOING DOWN. A part of me is starting to wonder why you didn't just ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 1
Hey, Noelle! Alright, so it seems like they want Sam for some reason. And for some reason, I'm sort of skeptical about Phillip. I mean, sure he's the head of ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 32 Part 2
Hey, Noelle! Everything is never fine. Everything is never ever fine when you have these kinds of endings. While Aidan has this all planned out, does he realize Falyn can't ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 32 Part 1
Hey, Noelle! This is the chapter I've been waiting for :3 The is my favorite chapter. Definitely. It all flowed so very well, going through Aidan's knowledge and a short ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 31 Part 3
Hey, Noelle! Your spam was interrupted right in the middle. Shall I continue? :3 I really don't think you could make it any more obvious what George is up to ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 31 Part 2
I don't remember Aiden being mentioned in chapter 29 and I just read it... Did you happen to edit (or am I that tired?) Anyways. Hey, Noelle! Whoa. That arguement ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 31 Part 1
Hey, Noelle! Momentary rant: Okay, so Akia doesn't think she's that special but Rhys came and visited her to warn her about what's coming. She is probably the only person ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 30
Hey, Noelle! This is my absolute favorite chapter you have written yet. I love but hate Rhys. Seriously, you are doubt such an amazing job with his character and after ...
Feb 22, 2015
