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Re: Numb
zsmith, Wow this is a really great poem! i can see the struggle this guy is going through in order to get this girl to talk to him. I keep ...
Feb 8, 2016 -
Re: Suicidal Socialite
TopHatsUniversal, This is a great representation of what some people may go through when they are considered suicidal. I would like to congratulate you on your work, and how effectively ...
Feb 5, 2016 -
Re: Wiener dogs in Terezin
Stranger, I feel this piece has a definite meaning to it. The fact of the girl's romantic preferences brings up a topic that even though i may support, others don't, ...
Jan 24, 2016 -
Re: Southbound As The Crow Flies
TheSilverFox, This is amazing! The part where you mention the beating of her heart and the fact that she actually 'can't' stuck with me throughout this piece. I also liked ...
Jan 24, 2016 -
Re: Timeless
QueenOfHearts, This is really good! I feel this piece of poetry is just so meaningful and splendid and spectacular! It flowed perfectly, and I absolutely LOVED the format of it ...
Jan 12, 2016 -
Re: I made a rainbow with the garden hose
GeeLyria, This piece has me relating to every word you said!!!! To start off, I love the first and last stanzas the best. I think this is because I can ...
Jan 10, 2016 -
Re: Past... Present... Future???
Anshira, This is a really good piece! it flows really easily and I can feel the emotion from line to line, stanza to stanza, etc.. etc........ I really like the ...
Jan 10, 2016 -
Re: The Dead Light
Yams, This is a great piece of work you got here! I am relating to this in my own way, which I do not wish to share, but I am ...
Jan 9, 2016 -
Re: The Tranquil Tumble
Elcuidador, This is good, but I keep rereading it and I cant fully understand what is happening. Maybe I'm just not comprehending that good tonight, but maybe you can clarify ...
Jan 9, 2016 -
Re: Flower Petals
Tigerlilly37, This is really good!!!! I love your choice of words, especially in the last verse! I wasn't expecting that ending and even though you said there was only one ...
Jan 9, 2016 -
Re: Garcia and Gracie A - 1/3 *EDITED*
BellaRoma, This was great! I feel Garcia's voice was perfect. I even imagined her saying those lines on the actual show! I think this is just fantastic and can definitely ...
Jan 8, 2016 -
Re: Good Night
DiamondForce99, I feel that this was great and then at the end they died, which totally threw me off(but in the good way :D)! I think your language is great, ...
Jan 8, 2016 -
Re: Emotional Fighter
DiamondForce99, I think this can come off as many different things to many different people (if that makes sense at all :P) To me, I think of when I was ...
Jan 8, 2016 -
Re: A Princess and Her Queen
Msho13, I absolutely love this!!!! The flow was amazing and the time lapse in it made me feel like I was in the moment watching you grow, you know? I ...
Jan 8, 2016 -
Re: hollow boxes
Hi I also feel that this was hard to follow, but the main idea was essentially there. This could be about the afterlife, but I also feel it is about ...
Dec 30, 2015
