Sparkle

Hi ImHero! Sparkle here to review! Firstly, wonderful use of vacillated! That's not a word you hear every day. :) This poem portrays a very poignant sense of sorrow that ...

Hey Bellator, Sparkle here to review! Firstly, great imagery in the first part when she is in the playground. Good vocabulary usage (trudged, tentative, ect.). I agree with most of ...

Hi Demora, Sparkle here to review! Firstly, I really like this piece. The rhymes are effortless and smooth. The first two lines provide a good hook for the reader. They ...

Hi, Sparkle here to review! To start off, I just want to say that this is a really impressive piece for an eleven-year-old. Most children at that age still think ...

Hi foreverfree, Sparkle here to review! First, I loved the description of your work. It made me curious about what your piece was going to be about. Your title is ...

Hi, Sparkle here to review this for you! First off, I agree with Hannah that bitterness is a very interesting and unexplored emotion. I think you did a good job ...

Hi, I'm Sparkle here to review your poem! First off, this is a topic that a lot of people can relate with. It can speak to many different people on ...

This is really beautiful. You use such wonderful language and the message is so powerful it made me want to cry. You are an amazing writer, and I don't really ...

Hi! I'm Sparkle. I agree with pretty much all of what guineapiggirl said about the line breaks and rhythm flow. this poem is really interestiing, and it makes a person ...

Hi Dancer! This poem is really interesting. It covers a topic that a lot of people can probably realate to, but it was still very original. A lot of the ...

Hi Rainbow. Wow, I found this really amazing. I was almost crying by the time I got to the end of it. It is long, but the message is really ...

Hi Kyla, I'm Sparkle. This poem is very relatable. It is heart-felt and seems well thought out. I think you portrayed fear very well, which is hard to do with ...

Hi karribou, I'm Sparkle. This poem is very relatable and has a very clear message, which I like in a poem. It is pretty but not over the top. "Create ...

Hello, I'm Sparkle. This is a really beautiful poem. The first line immediatly drew me in and made me curious. It sounds almost like a song. You have a lot ...

Hi, aqua! This is a very interesting poem that I think a lot of people could relate to. It does not have a very rhythmatic flow, but I think that ...