Soulfulwriter

Wow, thank you so much. I know I still have a lot of work to do. But this is only the draft of it. I will take your advice on ...

So, what do you suggest?

thank you!!!

Thanks for your help. And No, to the name change.

Positivity is what I like. Thank you. I will post it up later on today.

Thank you.

I am fixing it.

OMG thanks

Yeah, with a little schooling on writing. I am not new to writing, but I still have some learning to do.

Well, I just need help cleaning it up a little. I don't want someone to get the wrong idea about it. But, that's how it was given to me except ...

With that, I don't want to be seen as a bad person. I guess, I wanted to have it be Uquinta that comes up with the suggestion to help Trinique ...

So, you do know that people have different styles of writing right? So, not every style is the same. I found what works for me and if you are mad ...

Thank you. I have made the corrections on one site, I shall make them here.

thank you dearly.

I am not sure if I read it all. I am really tired. But, all of that you just said, is exactly what I want the reader to think. And ...