Soulfulwriter

Hi, I am Aya here to review your poem also give a little insight of my own. Getting on with it. I have been through that, I haven't cut myself, ...

All of that is how I feel about college. Constant studying and trying to get things in on time. Books, homework, papers, teachers, projects all crammed into a week. AHHHHHHHH!!!! ...

you spelled dint wrong (didn't) I am sure you know that, though. Overall, the poem is good. Everyone who did that or at least one thing on here is awesome. ...

I was like that once, shy to talk or say what I wanted. It truly did suck and some guys just thought I was being stuck up or whatever, but ...

This is the kind of poems that I steal...err umm...borrow when I can't think of what to tell my boyfriend. But, don't is good, but it's your work so I ...

A lot of emotion in this. I am not so sure what I would tell my persona. But, if I had a few things to say it would be. Suck ...

sounds like something that has come straight from the bible. I am not big on the whole religion thing, I stay to myself on that. Due to people having their ...

Yes that is what a part of life is about. The pain, the darkness, the grief, the depression, wondering if you are going to be alone or surrounded by people ...

I almost cried while reading this. It reminds me of when my mom lost her best friend to a serious depression issue. The times they had together and the years ...

I am not too good with reviews or giving feedback or anything like that. But, I do love the story so far. But, I believe that I may need to ...

There are a lot of meanings to life however everyone’s meanings are different from the last person’s meaning. I like how you have the ups and downs to life. I ...

The days of fall where hoodies and jeans are the outfit of almost everyone. I loved the poem it really does capture the fall season. I am going to be ...

Lol, I absolutely loved this poem. I will deem this as one of my favorites. LOVE IT. Now, what do I love about the poem. It’s the fact that at ...

Welcome, I see that you are new to yws. Depression….hmm. I don’t read much about it because it is all too real to be honest. Your poem is good though. ...

Yup, I am not so sure what to make of this story. It was not all that boring to be honest with you. I do not really see any typos, ...