What is Life?

There is alot of meaning to the question the meaning of life and to this work as well, you leave the reader in a more thoughtful existence trying to deciphering there own thoughts on the matter. Your words create the idea of wanting to make every minitue count and a pumped feeling, also your work is inspirational and rather brilliant. I'm enjoying every moment of this and i thank you for that.

There are a lot of meanings to life however everyone’s meanings are different from the last person’s meaning. I like how you have the ups and downs to life. I know a lot of people have had those and are continuing having them. The whole poem just works and I love it. Life is very precious but some people don’t seem to understand that. And they waste it by doing something they know they have no business doing. But that whole free-will thing is what has us going. Nice poem. Nothing I could see wrong with it.

This was a very beautiful poem! You had great word choice and the imagery your words created was very vivid. I liked how you asked questions to the reader. This helps us interact with the poem. This seemed playful and lighthearted, yet still held a lot of meaning that can relate to us all. You had a good meter and the poem flowed well. You didn't have any spelling, grammar, punctuation, formatting, or capitalization errors.

I did find that some of your rhymes didn't quite work. In the fourth stanza, "fullest" doesn't rhyme with "best". In the fifth stanza, "solace" doesn't rhyme with "pace".

I thought this was a great poem despite the few rhymes that didn't work as well as they could have. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this! *likes*

Hi Silver! I'm Eveningstar and I'm here to review your poem.

For starters, I like your rhyme scheme. It's good that you've tried to maintain a constant rhythm throughout the poem. It's not always perfect, but its a pretty good effort and with practice it'll get even better over time.

The theme of the poem is very inspiring and uplifting, telling us to enjoy the good things of life to the fullest. It's a heart-warming read, but could be even better if you added a little more depth to it. As it is, the poem sounds a tiny bit didactic, as if it's telling the reader how to go about life. If the instructive tone was changed a bit to a more sympathetic one, this poem would be a jewel!

I like the neat, two paragraph stanzas and the presentation overall is very well done. The triple exclamation marks at the end could be reduced to one, though.

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