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Dream, First off, great job! I really enjoyed this piece. I loved the format and your way of writing, it reminded me of lyrics to a song. I normally don't ...

SUSHI! GriffinClaw, here for a short review for a short piece. First off, this is a great hook. It made me want to continue reading and find out more about ...

Hello, TheGoonerGirl! GriffinClaw, here to review your beautiful piece! First off, I really enjoyed your piece. I like your writing style and your descriptions. Is this going to be continued? ...

Hi, Ignorance! GriffinClaw, here to review your work! First off, this is an amazing story! Very well written, and a great story line! I really enjoyed it. I do have ...

Hi, herbgirl! GriffinClaw, here to review your work! I just want to say that I really enjoyed this! I thought that the idea was creative and had a great fantasy ...

Hello, Hanorah! GriffinClaw, here to review! I love this poem. The feelings and vulnerability of the girl is very profound and beautifully written, so the reader can feel included. The ...

???Just another filthy mutie??? Her eyes turned a milky white and completed clouded over, she made a mental note to ask Hello, maleficent. GriffinClaw, here to review! First off, bravo ...

Hello, Cuppycakex7. I don't believe we have met. Welcome to YWS! I am GriffinClaw, here to review! First off, why did you comment on your own piece? :) Haha. Second, ...

Hello, fortis. GriffinClaw, here for duty! First off, wow. This is a great poem! Such a creative idea to use lights to describe life events! I love how you compared ...

Hello jordin! GriffinClaw, here to review your beautiful story about... *gasp!* Griffins! Awesome. So, I think this could be a very interesting story, but the amount of typos in it ...

Hi racket! GriffinClaw here for another review! First thing, this is such a clever idea! I love the ending, and the humor that follows the entire poem. I totally agree ...

Hi racket! GriffinClaw, here to review your beautiful poem! First off, I just want to say that it is very difficult to successfully pull off a nature poem. And you ...

GriffinClaw here to review! First off: Wow. I know you said that it was bad at the beginning, so I wasn't expecting much, but this is fantastic! The details and ...

Wow, love this. Great to know more Christians are out there! Good future reference, now I feel better about putting some of my own stuff like this out there... I ...

GriffinClaw here to review! I don't believe I have met you yet, hullo, I am super new to this! Just joined yesterday in fact. For starters, I love how you ...