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Arisa, the fire dancer; Marya, the wind tamer; Avi, the earth shaker; Remy, the wave maker. Four children gifted with immortality and power over the four elements. Elementals, the people called them. Each hailed from an ancient civilization, unique in their own ways.
Okay, we're starting with some things in italics, which is usually a dream or a flashback...but well, this doesn't sound like either of those here, so...very interesting point to get things started here...at any rate, this is a pretty exciting premise here...well, elementals aren't exactly a brand new idea I've never seen before, but I do always love stories with such powers..so well, let's see where this is taking us I suppose.
Mulciber, Anima, Terra, and Lympha, these were the villages that they called home. In a single night they all disappeared. No one knew why or where they went, but they did know one thing. They weren't coming back.
Well, as far as tales go, that one is quite mysterious and pretty dark, cause it looks like whoever is saying it, is very confident in the fact that these people who went missing have no chance whatsoever of ever making their way back...and that sounds kind of like whoever's narrating this here somehow knows what happened here. At any rate...it looks like a very interesting premise now...entire villages disappearing definitely gets you wanting to know more.
Lilith flexed her muscles, checking to see how compatible her new body was. It responded just like any other. It wasn't bad and it wasn't good, it would have to do. It was time to begin...
Well, that didn't reveal too much there...it almost looks like that was a piece of history or something along those lines...and we have someone almost gearing up to go to a fight of some sort. There looks to be a bit of a disconnect there between the start and the end at any rate.
Well...despite that though, this was still a pretty interesting prologue here, and it does sound like something that I would read here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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