SolitaryCanary

Hey there DarkKnight, I'm going to give this a go. Your poem here is very creative, and very surreal(to me). At first it seems to be a mix of narrative ...

Hey there Jc. When I first read this I instantly read it as if it were lyrics to a rap song. Maybe you should work on that? Haha. Anyway, here ...

Hey Vivian! Great story. I think I caught it before it was edited and it looks to have come very far from where it first was. Though, there are still ...

Hey SecreteJournalist, I relate with works of unrequited love, and this one has caught my eye. I enjoy the narrative and changes in perspective. From "Im going to fall." into ...

Hey there TGirly! I'm fairly new here, but I'm going to give this a go. I enjoyed this poem very much, it was very clear and full of emotion. It ...

Again I find much longing and nostalgia coming from this work. I don't have much to say as for a review but I can say that I thoroughly enjoyed this ...

Hi there! New here, but I'm here to have a go at a review. The first thing instantly noticed is all of the italicized lines. Generally italics are used to ...

Wonderful. I enjoy the style, the story, and at every step the longing. Being that I have a militaristic background myself, I feel the longing for both things. To uphold ...

Oh my. Quite beautifully written. It seems so elegant and wistful, and then strained and longing. It portrays the dichotomous relationship of emotion when speaking of or experiencing nostalgia. With ...

I love this. It's very different from most works, I think. I knew from the title that I would most likely enjoy it. "Cloth was hanging from a nearby tree. ...

I enjoyed this poem wholly, from the imagery to the symmetry between truth and trust. I think everyone else has pretty much covered the fact that it is a very ...

That feeling, the distortion of your reality that leaves you breathless and in awe. It's a fond and bittersweet feeling. I like the words you used and the meaning in ...

I enjoyed this. The simplicity and the choppiness. If it were any other poem(as I've noticed some of your others have choppy bits in them) I would despise it. I ...

I have to agree with HighTop. It's fluid, but maybe some more punctuation would help to slow down the flow of the poem. That's just an "at first glance" assumption, ...