Sohini

I like how the poem rhymes and how smoothly it flows and the uniqueness of it, having all line starting with 'Can I' but i also agrree with bleedingheart4u. i ...

PERHAPS IT IS ME WHO IS THE CAT. I, the Princesz Kat, officially declare you as a true and efficient cat!! the last poem was brilliant! HAil GArfield! i liked ...

this is surely a complicated poem with a strange flow. the timing should have continued for all the stanzas or none at all. the choice of words too is a ...

haha.. i love the first stanza. the idea's pretty neat and you have written it very nicely. As Claudette has already pointed out, the 'bird' need to be plural-ized and ...

Merry christmas to you anyway to crit and comment: loved the first line and the last line as well as 18 other lines which makes me say that you wrote ...

hmm what should i say... evryone seems to have used my favourite Bjorn-poem-comment-line (short and sweet) so i'll say it in Bengali ---- "Chhotto, shundor, mishti kobita" whicgh means (oder ...

this was really well written and keeping in mind the syllable-count and rhyming pattern-a difficult task wonderfully accomplished. i think the "Ensuing" in "And lo! ensuing its downfall, he fell; ...

really cute poem about mother-child love. i really enjoyed the last line. the imagery is well done too although the poem doesn't seem to flow too well. by any chance, ...

grand poem with the universal message uniquely put. i think this line "through my veins, entranced by dizzying visions. "is a bit too long and interferes with the flow. and ...

i will repeat what the others have said-the flow is simply wonderful. the short lines work really magically to give a new and pleasant feel to your poem. and i ...

this light mood poem. it cheers me up that there are more poeple who aren't good at acting other than me. oh i loved this line "While the audience shares ...

oh wow!! this poem is a brand tribute to Legolas!*melts at his thought* the imagery is grand and i love how the letters spell out his name... awesome originality!! i ...

wow, grand idea and neat handwriting. i loved this poem, the flow is so unique and i tell you while reading this i can feel your love for Holland. the ...

the idea is fantastic, it kinda reminds me of the plot of the next novel i'm planning to write. i loved the style and the odd but excellect flow of ...

This was soo very amusing and the writing still is very new, cheerful and very original!! I loved this story and enjoyed the random parts-you make a grand comic author. ...