Sohini

A fresh idea for romance indeed!! It's sweet as everyone has told you already, only I found the conversations in the beginning a tad too dragging. They kept on and ...

It's well written and I enjoyed the narration. Very precise, teenage jargon and we all understand the situation. However, the plot, though it's my all time favourite for school romance—Falling ...

First things first: 1.Title case your title. 2. Punctuate your work, I know it's short but punctuation helps. Note that you were lazy enough to forget the full stop in ...

Very interesting. It's really fresh your style and definitely your theme. I bet the ad agency will heavily pay you for this. You should consider illustrating this poem. The rhyming ...

Inkheart is brilliant; absolutely so. Dustfinger is an amazing character. in Inkspell he's great. I can't wait for October, that's when book 3 Inkdeath is supposed to release. Farid is ...

The first part seems a bit cliched, there are so many poems and love songs of this type. But from stanza 4, things are better. Although, I think this poem ...

A new waa y of putting Loneliness. Truly, it brings about the message of hope and friendship. Question, since the "me"s are with capital "M"s, the speaker of the poem ...

mary, first of all you've missed some apostrophes. This poem is a bit cliched and the "heart" and "hurt" word combination doesn't really sound too good. The theme is nice ...

I must tell you as the others have: Capitalize the "I"s. This poem is rather too casually written though I like the last line very much, but I think you ...

Firstly, Capitalize the "I"s it's disturbing when they're not in a literary work. Next, puntuate your works, that'll make it easier for the reader to go through it the way ...

Very romantic. Makes me want to fall in love with a pianist. I loved your poem, the style is smooth and there is a lovely music in the words. You ...

This poem is rather too simple and too obviouis. I mean, this is addressed to a child but speaks in a mature way, I don't think you could make a ...

Your first Poem — Congratulations! A promising attempt. Before I begin with the poem itself, I'd like to tell you that you musn't write such a subtitle/topic description to your ...

A reflective poem which probes deep. I liked thinking about the words...Peace and Hope, so simple yet so unknown to us. I think you could make the rhythm of a ...

I liked this poem and enjoyed the rhythm thoroughly. However, one VITAL thing you have completely missed out is Punctuation: there isn't even a fullstop at the end. YOu definitely ...