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Re: Soulmates - Chapter 2
DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNN. Drawing out the suspense, I see! Still not giving us any clues as to who this mystery person is. ;) Though... it looks like she's going to ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Soulmates - Chapter 1
Eek! What an intriguing idea! I love how you have a timer that will go off when you find the soulmate! It's a very interesting and original idea. Plus, you ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: School Life -- Part One
Hello, my fellow Time Lord and Tardis Rider! These are several interesting perspectives of what it is to be popular! One thing that would be pretty cool to write, if ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Heartlines--Chapter 2
Amen indeed! ;) James needs to be beaten soundly! Another interesting installment! I'm afraid that it doesn't do much, really, to advance the story, but it gives us some interesting ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Heartlines
What an interesting story idea! It'll be a little tough to implement because time travel stories can be hard to write, but this is a great start! So, I have ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Does it Bother You? (Edited)
Hi! First of all, I want to point out a typo! "You see people sexual attraction with both sexes." I think you're missing a verb? Anyway, on with the poem! ...
Jul 2, 2015 -
Re: loosely
Hi Crysi! I really liked this. It bounced around like some mad 80s pop song, but that made it extra cool. The only thing that I didn't quite like is ...
May 21, 2015 -
Re: All My Sins
Hi! Back again. Don't hate me for saying this but... uh... the other poem is wayyyyy better. This one, in comparison, is much longer, unwieldy, and rambling, and not really ...
Apr 15, 2015 -
Re: My Best Friend is Gay.
I am glad that it isn't based on real events! Though, judging from the comments, certainly many people identify with this whole situation, which makes me sad. I like the ...
Apr 14, 2015 -
Re: My First Experience With Cannibalism
You are my 3700th review! :o I really like this. It reminds me of Pablo Neruda's poetry in it simplicity and honest storytelling. I think what really gets me is ...
Mar 18, 2015 -
Re: piano
I do like this! I do! I am kind of sad that you missed out on an opportunity to include some musical terms though. I think that would be pretty ...
Mar 17, 2015 -
Re: Koo The Story
Hi, anel! This was a neat story! I like that you dealt with China's history! Not many people delve into the Eastern history very much. I also like that you ...
Mar 17, 2015 -
Re: Limbo
In the house I grew up with, we had a bunch of poplar trees right outside my bedroom window. Every once in a while, when the wind came up (we ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: The Apple
Oh man. I like this story a lot. Like, I wish I wrote this story. This is so cool. I actually became a bioengineer because I loved reading about genetic ...
Mar 8, 2015 -
Re: in which two people fall out of love
Uh... what's with all the abusive and manipulative side notes? Like, "There's nothing you can do to stop me." Or, "You will always come back wanting more." It just strikes ...
Mar 7, 2015
