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Amen indeed! ;) James needs to be beaten soundly! Another interesting installment! I'm afraid that it doesn't do much, really, to advance the story, but it gives us some interesting ...

What an interesting story idea! It'll be a little tough to implement because time travel stories can be hard to write, but this is a great start! So, I have ...

Hi! First of all, I want to point out a typo! "You see people sexual attraction with both sexes." I think you're missing a verb? Anyway, on with the poem! ...

Hi Crysi! I really liked this. It bounced around like some mad 80s pop song, but that made it extra cool. The only thing that I didn't quite like is ...

Hi! Back again. Don't hate me for saying this but... uh... the other poem is wayyyyy better. This one, in comparison, is much longer, unwieldy, and rambling, and not really ...

I am glad that it isn't based on real events! Though, judging from the comments, certainly many people identify with this whole situation, which makes me sad. I like the ...

You are my 3700th review! :o I really like this. It reminds me of Pablo Neruda's poetry in it simplicity and honest storytelling. I think what really gets me is ...

I do like this! I do! I am kind of sad that you missed out on an opportunity to include some musical terms though. I think that would be pretty ...

Hi, anel! This was a neat story! I like that you dealt with China's history! Not many people delve into the Eastern history very much. I also like that you ...

In the house I grew up with, we had a bunch of poplar trees right outside my bedroom window. Every once in a while, when the wind came up (we ...

Oh man. I like this story a lot. Like, I wish I wrote this story. This is so cool. I actually became a bioengineer because I loved reading about genetic ...

Uh... what's with all the abusive and manipulative side notes? Like, "There's nothing you can do to stop me." Or, "You will always come back wanting more." It just strikes ...

Hi Meandbooks! This poem feels like it needs a third stanza. Seeing as your first stanza is about the flaws of your physical body that you see in high definition, ...

This review is brought to you by Mary and the Cry It Out Method in which she screams like a banshee. >.> I am going to be the horrible person ...

Haha! Tina can so easily prove Gemma wrong, if she wanted to,but she doesn't! This amuses me. Tina must be a patient person! She could use politely, "White is a ...