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Re: "An Old Companion"
Hello pendr! :D I love this! I only have one little nitpick.... "The pages sound like wings when it is opened. When it's closed, it's put back where it rests, ...
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Re: If.
Hello Collideascope! :D I really loved this poem! I only could find a couple of nitpicks on this one! :D Dieying should be dying. (I could see what you meant ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: The Powerful Gifts (Chapter 3, Part 1)
Hello.... again! :D FINALLY!! I am up to date with the Powerful Gifts!! :D I enjoyed the previous chapters, and I really liked this one as well! :) I couldn't ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: The Powerful Gifts (Chapter 2, Part 2)
Hello again! :D This was wonderful! I loved it! I am sort of scared/in awe of Augeon. Should I be? :) I was definitely NOT expecting Fyron to hit Maven!! ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: The Powerful Gifts (Chapter 2, Part 1) ((Corrected))
Hello BookWolf! I LOVE IT! I would say I can't put your novel down, but sadly, it is limited to a computer screen. :) After reading this, I love Maven ...
Oct 31, 2014 -
Re: The Powerful Gifts (Part 2 of Chapter 1) ((Corrected Again))
Hello Again! :) Question One, answered! :D I am glad you answered a question here, otherwise I might have exploded with "unknowingness". :D But now, two more questions have evolved ...
Oct 31, 2014 -
Re: The Powerful Gifts (Part 1 of Chapter 1) ((Corrected))
Hey BookWolf! :D So after reading your short story on the wolf, I decided to come and take a look at your other pieces, thinking that I would find something ...
Oct 31, 2014 -
Re: 30 days part 1 (Improved)
Hello! :D I really love how this starts out! I only have a couple of nitpicks on this... "(Maybe some Facebook would cheer me up)" I think maybe it would ...
Oct 29, 2014 -
Re: The Little Girl was Afraid
Hello Elizabeth! :) I really loved this piece. Spine-tingling! :) I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what would happen next! :) I only ...
Oct 29, 2014 -
Re: Goodbye
I love this poem!! Just a couple of nitpicks though.... "The guilt, the pain sometimes I try To walk up to you And say it, goodbye" I really like this ...
Oct 29, 2014 -
Re: Math Class
So I just finished reading and reviewing your latest poem, "An Idea", and I saw another poem titled "Math Class". I couldn't resist.:D I had a pretty good feeling I ...
Oct 21, 2014 -
Re: An Idea
Hey! I actually thought this was a really humorous poem! I loved reading it! You describe my poems perfectly, most of them end up flying majestically into a wall!! :D ...
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: No Name
Hey Howl! I love this poem! Most poems with this theme are all about how it's totally okay that you ripped me in two, or shattered my hopes and dreams, ...
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: Down By the Old Mill Stream
Hello! I really loved this poem. You did a good job using imagery! I could almost see the scene while I was reading it! "The water rippled off the wood," ...
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: Alone
Hey Isabell! I agree that this is not a poem to be laughed at! It is a serious poem. I really like how you put the word alone at the ...
Oct 20, 2014
