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  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: "An Old Companion"

    Hello pendr! :D I love this! I only have one little nitpick.... "The pages sound like wings when it is opened. When it's closed, it's put back where it rests, ...

    Nov 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If.

    Hello Collideascope! :D I really loved this poem! I only could find a couple of nitpicks on this one! :D Dieying should be dying. (I could see what you meant ...

    Nov 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Powerful Gifts (Chapter 3, Part 1)

    Hello.... again! :D FINALLY!! I am up to date with the Powerful Gifts!! :D I enjoyed the previous chapters, and I really liked this one as well! :) I couldn't ...

    Nov 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Powerful Gifts (Chapter 2, Part 2)

    Hello again! :D This was wonderful! I loved it! I am sort of scared/in awe of Augeon. Should I be? :) I was definitely NOT expecting Fyron to hit Maven!! ...

    Nov 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Powerful Gifts (Chapter 2, Part 1) ((Corrected))

    Hello BookWolf! I LOVE IT! I would say I can't put your novel down, but sadly, it is limited to a computer screen. :) After reading this, I love Maven ...

    Oct 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Powerful Gifts (Part 2 of Chapter 1) ((Corrected Again))

    Hello Again! :) Question One, answered! :D I am glad you answered a question here, otherwise I might have exploded with "unknowingness". :D But now, two more questions have evolved ...

    Oct 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Powerful Gifts (Part 1 of Chapter 1) ((Corrected))

    Hey BookWolf! :D So after reading your short story on the wolf, I decided to come and take a look at your other pieces, thinking that I would find something ...

    Oct 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Fantasy Re: 30 days part 1 (Improved)

    Hello! :D I really love how this starts out! I only have a couple of nitpicks on this... "(Maybe some Facebook would cheer me up)" I think maybe it would ...

    Oct 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Little Girl was Afraid

    Hello Elizabeth! :) I really loved this piece. Spine-tingling! :) I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what would happen next! :) I only ...

    Oct 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Goodbye

    I love this poem!! Just a couple of nitpicks though.... "The guilt, the pain sometimes I try To walk up to you And say it, goodbye" I really like this ...

    Oct 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Math Class

    So I just finished reading and reviewing your latest poem, "An Idea", and I saw another poem titled "Math Class". I couldn't resist.:D I had a pretty good feeling I ...

    Oct 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: An Idea

    Hey! I actually thought this was a really humorous poem! I loved reading it! You describe my poems perfectly, most of them end up flying majestically into a wall!! :D ...

    Oct 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: No Name

    Hey Howl! I love this poem! Most poems with this theme are all about how it's totally okay that you ripped me in two, or shattered my hopes and dreams, ...

    Oct 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Down By the Old Mill Stream

    Hello! I really loved this poem. You did a good job using imagery! I could almost see the scene while I was reading it! "The water rippled off the wood," ...

    Oct 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Alone

    Hey Isabell! I agree that this is not a poem to be laughed at! It is a serious poem. I really like how you put the word alone at the ...

    Oct 20, 2014


He who has a why to live for can bear with almost any how.
— Friedrich Nietzsche