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  • Art » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The Struggle

    Hello! :D Snazzy here to review your WONDERFUL poem! :) "A simple mistake has made me go blind. No more disputes, your verdict is set, A promise remains, you mustn't ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: If you're Peter, I'm Wendy

    Hello! :D :) SnazzyPencil here for a review! :D :) Here are some things that I found... "I, go through the motions, every single day" I don't think the comma ...

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Eight

    Hello! :D Sorry this review came a little late. :) I finally found the time to get back on here! :D :) I really love this, and I only found ...

    Nov 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forbidden Shadows, Chapter Five

    Hello!!! :D SO MUCH SUSPENSE!!! :D I love it!! :D I couldn't find anything to correct in this! Is it a human? Is it Hawkscreech, or even....Willowfur??? :D Is Willowfur ...

    Nov 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Four

    Hello....again....again... :D I love this!!! :D Hawkscreech is a good name for him. It just sounds evil! :) I wasn't expecting all of the cats to actually believe Bluejay and ...

    Nov 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Three

    Hello! :D Once again, a suspense-filled chapter!! I only have one nitpick.... "Everycat else did the same, so not to see what others were choosing..." Everycat should be Every cat. ...

    Nov 20, 2014
  • Script » Humor, Supernatural Re: Hauntception

    Hello! :D :) This is hilarious!!! :D :) I love it!! I wasn't expecting Mckenzie to be pulling the prank!! I just thought she was delusional! I only have a ...

    Nov 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Seasons Greetings!

    Hello! :D This is hilarious! :) I love it! I only have one little nitpick. :D I noticed how this is all one group. Maybe you could separate each of ...

    Nov 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Am I A Weirdo, Mommy?

    Hello :D I love this!! :) Especially the ending! I only have one little nitpick. In the fifteenth paragraph, you did not put quotations after wise. Besides that, I really ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Cliff Jumping in Maui

    Hello! :D Snazzy here to review your story! :D First of all, is this real? If you don't mind me asking... :D Because that would be-be, just AMAZING!! :D I ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Witless

    Hello! :D :) Snazzy here to review your story!! :D :) I really like this! The title Witless is really appropriate!! :D I only have a couple of nitpicks- "making ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Stay

    Hello! :D Snazzy here to review your FABULOUS poem!! :D First off, I loved this. The meaning behind it, the ending, and just the way you worded it! Wonderful! :D ...

    Nov 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Other Re: a talk under a bridge-(hopefully a part 1 to something)

    Hello! :D (I really need to find a new "opening" to my reviews, "hello" and "hey" are getting old. :D ) Well, I was going to give this a review ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Other » Other, Other Re: Over the bridge

    Hello! So I haven't read part one yet, but after reading this...I think I will!! :D I only have one little nitpick. :) "If he's sleeping, even in that god-awful ...

    Nov 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ironclaw Chapter 1: Tale of the Coyote and Escaping the Cage

    Hello! :D Snazzy here to review your work!! :D So since I have been CRAVING some fantasy lately, I decided to give yours a try! :) I love it!! Now ...

    Nov 17, 2014


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