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Re: The Struggle
Hello! :D Snazzy here to review your WONDERFUL poem! :) "A simple mistake has made me go blind. No more disputes, your verdict is set, A promise remains, you mustn't ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: If you're Peter, I'm Wendy
Hello! :D :) SnazzyPencil here for a review! :D :) Here are some things that I found... "I, go through the motions, every single day" I don't think the comma ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Eight
Hello! :D Sorry this review came a little late. :) I finally found the time to get back on here! :D :) I really love this, and I only found ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows, Chapter Five
Hello!!! :D SO MUCH SUSPENSE!!! :D I love it!! :D I couldn't find anything to correct in this! Is it a human? Is it Hawkscreech, or even....Willowfur??? :D Is Willowfur ...
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Four
Hello....again....again... :D I love this!!! :D Hawkscreech is a good name for him. It just sounds evil! :) I wasn't expecting all of the cats to actually believe Bluejay and ...
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden Shadows Chapter Three
Hello! :D Once again, a suspense-filled chapter!! I only have one nitpick.... "Everycat else did the same, so not to see what others were choosing..." Everycat should be Every cat. ...
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: Hauntception
Hello! :D :) This is hilarious!!! :D :) I love it!! I wasn't expecting Mckenzie to be pulling the prank!! I just thought she was delusional! I only have a ...
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: Seasons Greetings!
Hello! :D This is hilarious! :) I love it! I only have one little nitpick. :D I noticed how this is all one group. Maybe you could separate each of ...
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: Am I A Weirdo, Mommy?
Hello :D I love this!! :) Especially the ending! I only have one little nitpick. In the fifteenth paragraph, you did not put quotations after wise. Besides that, I really ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Cliff Jumping in Maui
Hello! :D Snazzy here to review your story! :D First of all, is this real? If you don't mind me asking... :D Because that would be-be, just AMAZING!! :D I ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Witless
Hello! :D :) Snazzy here to review your story!! :D :) I really like this! The title Witless is really appropriate!! :D I only have a couple of nitpicks- "making ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Stay
Hello! :D Snazzy here to review your FABULOUS poem!! :D First off, I loved this. The meaning behind it, the ending, and just the way you worded it! Wonderful! :D ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: a talk under a bridge-(hopefully a part 1 to something)
Hello! :D (I really need to find a new "opening" to my reviews, "hello" and "hey" are getting old. :D ) Well, I was going to give this a review ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Over the bridge
Hello! So I haven't read part one yet, but after reading this...I think I will!! :D I only have one little nitpick. :) "If he's sleeping, even in that god-awful ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Ironclaw Chapter 1: Tale of the Coyote and Escaping the Cage
Hello! :D Snazzy here to review your work!! :D So since I have been CRAVING some fantasy lately, I decided to give yours a try! :) I love it!! Now ...
Nov 17, 2014
