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Hello! :D :D Snazzy here to review your story! :D This is really interesting! :) A great idea for a short story. The title really drew me in! Great job ...

Hello! :D Snazzy here for a review! :D (I'm trying to get that fourth star! ;) ) Anyway, this is really great. :) You had very vivid description through all ...

Hello! :D This is really great. I agree with Gorgeous, It's a good idea to share a part o your life in a story. :) Great job with that! Other ...

Hello! :D I agree with Lau, I can't wait to read more of this! :D It's really a great idea for a novel, and It sounds really interesting! :) I ...

Hello! :) This is really interesting. :) :D A very nice story idea! :) I only have one little thing to say about this- I noticed that you put a ...

Hello! :) This is a very nice idea for your story! :D Great job! I'm glad it's "not like the others". :) It's very unique. :) Here's what I found... ...

Hello! :) This is indeed, a very, very emotional poem. I really loved the idea of it, and not once did I think your rhythm was broken up. Great job! ...

Hello! :D This is a great story! I really just started getting into "this type of story", and I really love it! It flowed very smoothly. :D Great job. I ...

Hello! :D I love this!! :) The repetition of "touched the stars" made it even more enjoyable. :) Great job! I only have one little nitpick. :) "But at least ...

Hello! :D This is hilarious. I don't even know why. It just was. (I have a very odd sense of humor I guess... :D ) It was very well written! ...

Hello! :D So I decided that since I couldn't be here for review day yesterday, I'd look through the green room and 'sweep' it up a little. :D I agree ...

Hello! :D This is a really great story! You used excellent personification when describing the trees, and bushes and such. :) I really enjoyed it. I only have a couple ...

Hello! :D Great poem! The only thing I was going to say was already mentioned. :) My favorite part was this- "Even after the clicking of the keys stop And ...

Hello! :D This is a very nice story, and a VERY nice idea! Most authors write about the same things- vampires or zombies...which is okay, but I like something different! ...

Hello! :D Holy Stinking Cow. This is so true. (I'd like this a million times if possible!) I only have a couple of little nitpicks. :) "How I hate the ...