SmileILoveYou

What an interesting combination of words! I applaud you for being simple and showing a deep emotion in this piece, I hope that you will continue because obviously you are ...

I love the thought and description of this piece, but the flow is somewhat choppy. I would go back and rethink the use of some of the periods and commas. ...

You have pretty much put my recent diary entries onto paper and put them into the form of a poem. I have absolutely no reason to critique you (Even though ...

Okay...Are you psychic? This is what I've been trying to put on paper for months! I love it! If you're writing a satire then that saddens me. I love every ...

I absolutely adore this! :) I've been waiting for something like this to show people that there is a point to writing. Writing brings out a deeper part of us, ...

I love the thoughts that you have put into this poem. The message is clear, and you produce it in both a deep way but also an easy way to ...

I really liked this piece. I liked that you used metaphors to get your point across and in a beautiful way too. I liked the lines: Before we ever grew, ...

I like the thought but the words are kind of too big for me...There is a misuse of thy instead of thee...The big words kind of distract the reader and ...

I really want o read this piece, I can tell by the reviews that's its good. Do you think it will be back up soon? Gosh, I'm impatient. :)

I really like the imagery in this piece. You put real emotion into this. I know I keep repeating imagery in my reviews but imagery is the base to a ...

I like this poem. If the first few lines were clearer it would enhance the poems meaning but I too very much like the last two lines. I like the ...

I really like this piece! You have made your point and kept intrigued through each line. Very well written in terms of structure and description. In terms of emotion you ...

Really good poem. I can't wait to read it with the poem spacing fixed. This poem stands out to me because of the amount of emotion you have clearly put ...

I love the description in this piece. Instead of using the common phrases, you made it your own. Love the rhyme in this piece, I love how I can actually ...

I really like the formatting of this piece. There are some things that are unclear though. You go through almost all of the poem revolving around green but then Root ...