Dedicate My Tears

by writingmyheartout

Published December 3, 2012

In Poetry

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Tonight I will cry Myself to sleep. Just like I have All my life. But tonight WIll be different. I have always Cried for myself. This time I cry for others. For all the people WIthout homes. To those who Stay strong in the Face of hoplessness. For those to whom A book is worth a million. I dedicate my crying To these people. So that they know Someone cares. I will help them, Hope for them, And pray for them. I will give to them Whenever I can. What will you do?
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Arcticus
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Arcticus wrote a review Review · Dec 5, 2012

The voice that rings out from this is : "There are people facing worse. Stop whining about your 'problems'". Dropping in this comment to say that I really liked it. *likes*

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vidhya iyer
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vidhya iyer wrote a review Review · Dec 5, 2012

hi there..
i like it... :-)
it seems you have a tough fight with the spacing in your poems...
same with "love is such a difficult thing" too.. watsup..? am waiting for a redo of it.. :-) emotional and social one.. i like it :-) :-)

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SmileILoveYou
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SmileILoveYou wrote a review Review · Dec 3, 2012

Really good poem. I can't wait to read it with the poem spacing fixed. This poem stands out to me because of the amount of emotion you have clearly put into it. Great Job!

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aouther2b
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aouther2b commented Comment · Dec 3, 2012

Please let me know when you get the spacing fixed I really want to read it like you intended it, it looks really good!

writingmyheartout commented Comment · Dec 3, 2012

Ok my spacing is messed up AGAIN!! Sorry guys I promise I'm working on it.

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