SkyeDragon

Wow, I loved that, beautiful. Keep it up! MORE! Please!

First off...woah. Too much info at once, break it down into smaller paragraphs. If it's all in one big blob, then they might drift off into different sentences. Or not ...

Hey there, I won't make this too long, but I did notice a few things. First, at the beginning, you said: I’d flopped the test in History by answering wrongly ...

Wow, very moving. One question though, This person cried for someone, but why? Did they break up, did the other person die, move away, or is it one of those ...

I think AhmadBlues got everything. So, yeah, what he said, and I like the story. Nice spacing, creating new paragraphs, that always keeps your readers on their toes. Well done.

Wow, I LIKE IT. There aren't very many non-cussing horror stories. But you did a really good job with this. You did a good job of describing the chase, making ...

Hey, this is an interesting start. First, make sure you capitalize proper nouns, such as names and places. As well as the start to sentences. Two, make sure you are ...

Alright, number 1, I LOVE zombie stories. I think you've done a really good job with this, and I'd really enjoy it if you continued. I think CeruleanBlaze already mentioned ...

Interesting, one thing however, when abbriviating 'because', make sure you put 'cause, instead of cause. Because 'cause is not a word, just an abbreviation. Other than that, it is interesting ...

I agree with PotterGeek101, I was confused on this, I went from dog to cat to human and back to dog again. Potter Geek got most of the corrections except, ...

Hey Stars! I like it. First thing was 'and' at the beginning at a sentence, now maybe this rule doesn't reply to poems, but try to avoid using those words. ...

Hello Umbreon, I like the start to your story, I would really like it if you continued. The first thing I noticed was run-on sentences. You have a few of ...

Interesting...first thing, I just prefer this but, in most poems, unless you are intending to use slang in a poem, avoid abbreviations. It just makes it sound so much better ...

Wow, that was a lot of things, from sad to moving. I also like your choice of words, uncommon words can leave an impression, a good one. Using the same ...

I like it, just like before, a little work on grammar and punctuation, a little work on the sentences' lengths and you should be fine! Keep posting! I want to ...