Published March 1, 2012
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This poem really confused me in some spots and I could not keep the vision of what is going on in the poem the whole time in this... I know what its about and it seems to be nice topic to write about but remember to be sure to try and to use more detail in the poem if you may to describe.... Keep up the good work though you are defiantly a writer with some good potentials
-- Lashea <3
Interesting, one thing however, when abbriviating 'because', make sure you put 'cause, instead of cause. Because 'cause is not a word, just an abbreviation. Other than that, it is interesting and a nice topic. This seems to be a popular topic at the moment.
-Skye-
Thanks for the post. I will definitly remember it for next time.