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Pain is never enough

Poetry

Published February 26, 2012

In Zwinky Poetry

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I fall to my knees in tears,

My life is full of fear.

My world crumbles down,

And it feels like no one is around.

My world has changed,

Nothing is the same.

I was once so happy,

It sounds so sappy.

But I can never go back to that day,

We're everything felt okay.

I'm stuck in a dark hole,

We're I have lost my soul.

This is my life,

It's full of pain a strife.

I self-harm,

So don't be alarmed.

It just me, trying to get through the day,

So I don't go off astray.

Some people disapprove,

And some are just confused.

It helps me cope,

So I don't lose hope.

It helps me to hold on,

When everything else is gone.

I have tried to end it all,

But instead I just fall.

Down into the pit of tears,

Were nothing is clear.

There was a time

Where everything was fine

My heart was glowing for God

But now I am lost

I know I'm no longer faithful

I'm just a creation that is wasteful

My God hates me

And that how it's going to be

Comments & reviews · 1

SkyeDragon

Review

SkyeDragon wrote a review Review · Feb 26, 2012

Interesting...first thing, I just prefer this but, in most poems, unless you are intending to use slang in a poem, avoid abbreviations. It just makes it sound so much better with the actual words.
Thank you!

Light griefs are loquacious, but the great are dumb.
— Seneca